Mary Anne, He Ain't Heavy and Halloween

Caleb,
THANK YOU, THANK YOU , THANK YOU so very much for this extra story this month, boy was I surprised when I saw it in my mail. You have just made my Halloween much more better thank you once again.

(LOL we had to scramble on the order of what we had too girl And you are very very welcome!)

Hmm I wonder what Jack and Aled did to make Jeff and Caroline mad at them and especially Jeff taking them both out to the woodshed,

(Now see, I told Adam this needed to be explained better. Jeff and Caroline raised their children to watch out for each other. The boys watch over Melissa even though she is married and in Aled's case, his big sister. They also look out for their niece and nephew and brother in law. It has fallen to Jack to keep an eye on both of his siblings as he is the oldest of the three and unfortunately Jeff and Caroline felt he had not done a proper job or Aled would not of been in that race with the others. Well, he might have but would you really think it over if you had a big brother to answer too as well as your partner?)

Aled I could understand but Jack now that is a scene I would have never ever thought about seeing Jack in that position and I totally enjoyed that with a passion and Chris asking Jeff if he had broke his top, now that was hilarious to me.

(Because the boys let their father down their mother understands him well enough to step in and defuse the situation before it gets blown up so to speak. Jack was punished because in Jeff's eyes he had not done his family duty and Aled well because he's Aled LOL)

(Chris asking Jeff that is because he knows Jeff well enough to tease him and he also knows him well enough to do it with respect,having learnt that from Jack I would imagine)

Now we know who can take care of Jack if there is anything else that he would do that would find himself is trouble that no other top would even think about doing especially to Jack,

(Oh darlin, I think this was a one off. As I said it was all due to family, Jeff would never interfere with his life in any other circumstances unless he decided to kill himself or commit murder I'm sure)

I love the addition of both Jeff and Caroline makes everything in Nether Kipping much more precious.

(We do have our periphery characters who show up on occasion but I enjoy these two a lot also so hopefully they will make more appearances in thefuture)

The poker game was a hoot with the Tops telling each other what they have witnessed since the brats have come back home from their stint with brat swap. Isaac making Adam, Kevin, Jack and Declan go running with him for a five mile run was incredible

(Ah yes but he didn't get his way now did he? Poor guy is getting it from everyone it seems)

and looks like so far Ethan has got away with eating cake again after telling the others to piss off now that is bravery if I ever saw it.

(It makes him super hyper and Ethan has enough going on without being Ethan on drugs LOL. He only did that because of what Jonathan said to him. It hurt his feelings.)

Man those brats just love to find trouble when their tops are not available don't they, let's just hope Jeff don't find out about it or else that woodshed will be a very busy place for awhile I do believe, but we all know he is going to know who did the TPing of the village, woe is them I have to say.

(I'm sure he will and he is probably waiting to see what his wife's reaction is!)

Most definitely looking forward to reading more stories in November and I can't wait.

We have a few ideas going through our heads at moment and have even gotten one half done, I think. Maybe more. But we have I think five more to go!)



Mary Anne
PS. HAPPY HALLOWEEN TO YOU BOTH AND HAVE AND FUN AND SAFE NIGHT!!!!

THANKS! We were away for the weekend at our favourite hotel busily writing away. LOL