Hi Caleb,
I have just now finally got around to reading this fantastic and long awaited story from you and Adam. Thank you for the heads up to the new characters that I would encounter while reading this and I was happy to see that the Nether Kipling Village got four new characters with Paul, Gideon, Dylan and Ian and I loved them a lot, I didn't have any problem with them once I got to know them better.
They grow on a person I think. You will get some background on them all in another story that we are going to begin soon. (since this was months ago I have to say that that story in being written and is already nearly 200 pages)
Sounds like the brats didn't like the newcomers in Khaki at first and tried their best to make sure that no more ex-soldiers would invade the village but unfortunately that plan backfired big time for all involved including Jesse and Emily I see and I loved it.
You know what they say, best laid plans and all. Our boys just can't seem to stay out of trouble no matter what they do.
Now I got a laugh out of Jack, Ethan, Damon, Aled, and Edward when they found out who was moving into the village none other than the RSM himself, especially Jack I didn't think anything scared him, I thought he scared the others and that was a precious sight.
Jack was young when he met the RSM and as he says Paul helped to make him the man he is in some ways. It was precious and hopefully we can explore that in more depth at some point.
Now though that the brat fiasco has been taken care of and Jack and the new ex-soldiers are finally becoming friends albeit very slowly the village will be much more calmer and everyone will start getting along more and the four newcomers will be welcomed into the family with open arms. I guess the brats in the village will not only have to be on the lookout for Jack and Kevin being swat happy but probably down the road in the future Paul and Dylan as well when they get to know them better.
I know Paul won't find it difficult to swat at will, he was the RSM after all but Dylan may stay his hand a bit more. He was just a Captain after all lol!
The talk in the garden between Paul and Chris was memorable and now I think Chris understands Jack and the others more and the reasons they don't want to talk about Sandhurst and what they went through as far as being in the service goes.
Chris has a big curious bone hidden inside him but he lets it come out as it will. His main concern in life is Jack. You've seen the WWJD braclets that came out eons ago? FOr Chris it is what would jack do.
Most definitely looking forward to reading more of your amazing stories very soon or whenever you two have the time to write more, that is if you do that is. By the way thank you for the pictures of the chickens they are adorable, well for chickens anyway. I hope you and Adam are doing well and things are settling down for you two finally.
Mary Anne
The chickens are all laying now and have their own unique personalities. I really enjoy watching them. Adam put a roof on their pen and we call it their conservatory lol!
Wednesday, 24 November 2010
Caleb,
I have gotten around to reading this second wonderful and magnificent story and I thoroughly loved and enjoyed reading it a lot. Well now looks like Nicky had the households of Jack, Chris, Ethan, Andy, Adam, Caleb, Kevin, Alex and Callum and Travis in an uproar with the microbugs fiasco with the gardeners and I loved it.
This came about because Adam took up gardening. Yes he did! I hate it but it keeps him happy and busy and not thinking about other things. Although I may never have sex again after reading about those icky things EUW!
I also loved the revenge err payback that Chris, Andy, Caleb, Alex and Travis got on Nicky with tying him to a pole and tar and feathering him so to speak, but I don't think Damon was too happy with what he saw either and I say one thing Chris and Caleb were two very brave brats to stand up to a top like Damon believe me.
Yes there is just something about Damon that is scary isn't there? Maybe we will learn more about him in other stories and see what that is all about.
I don't think they got away with it though especially with both Chris and Caleb kicking Jack and Adam in the shins, Alex, Andy, and Travis got off a little lighter I think, not sure though. Looks as if Jack didn't like the little cuff Ethan gave him at the cafe and punished him by making his polish the stones on the patio with a toothbrush, soap and water and I loved it.
Jack is devious, just plan and simple sadistic, devious, cunning etc. Nuff said.
Looking forward September when I get to read more of your amazing and fantastic stories. I hope you and Adam have a wonderful time together and a fun-filled vacation. Thank you for asking about my mother I really appreciate it a lot and it means a lot to me.
Not a problem girl, I do keep her in the prayers.
Mary Anne
I have gotten around to reading this second wonderful and magnificent story and I thoroughly loved and enjoyed reading it a lot. Well now looks like Nicky had the households of Jack, Chris, Ethan, Andy, Adam, Caleb, Kevin, Alex and Callum and Travis in an uproar with the microbugs fiasco with the gardeners and I loved it.
This came about because Adam took up gardening. Yes he did! I hate it but it keeps him happy and busy and not thinking about other things. Although I may never have sex again after reading about those icky things EUW!
I also loved the revenge err payback that Chris, Andy, Caleb, Alex and Travis got on Nicky with tying him to a pole and tar and feathering him so to speak, but I don't think Damon was too happy with what he saw either and I say one thing Chris and Caleb were two very brave brats to stand up to a top like Damon believe me.
Yes there is just something about Damon that is scary isn't there? Maybe we will learn more about him in other stories and see what that is all about.
I don't think they got away with it though especially with both Chris and Caleb kicking Jack and Adam in the shins, Alex, Andy, and Travis got off a little lighter I think, not sure though. Looks as if Jack didn't like the little cuff Ethan gave him at the cafe and punished him by making his polish the stones on the patio with a toothbrush, soap and water and I loved it.
Jack is devious, just plan and simple sadistic, devious, cunning etc. Nuff said.
Looking forward September when I get to read more of your amazing and fantastic stories. I hope you and Adam have a wonderful time together and a fun-filled vacation. Thank you for asking about my mother I really appreciate it a lot and it means a lot to me.
Not a problem girl, I do keep her in the prayers.
Mary Anne
Story
Caleb,
I have finally gotten around to reading this fist new story you sent and I wanted to let you know that I thoroughly loved and enjoyed reading it with a passion. I see Ethan was up to his tricks again with the chocolate cake thanks to Trevor and it sounded like when Jen found out she was not a very happy doctor and she let Ethan, Travis, Chloe and Trevor know it as well by contacting Jack and making sure he took care of Ethan and boy did he and I see that over the knee cane is history and decorating Jack's garden for that I know Ethan, Andy, Chris and Trevor are grateful for.
Jack takes his resposibilities seriously and possibly moreso since that "talk" with his dada few stories back.
Jen knows just where to hit so it hurts doesn't she.
As far as Travis, Chloe and Trevor they were keeping Adam's corners company in the cafe and I loved it. Looks like Adam's talk with Callum about his and Travis's relationship has changed them for the better and now Callum gets to be home more and Travis don't have to feel like a lodger anymore. I guess we can safely say the *barn raising* was a success all the way around. Good thing both Callum and Travis know how to cook because is sounds like Stella and Beatrice are going their own way and Stella won't be working for Callum and Travis anymore.
Everyone moves on at some time and even though Stella has been with Callum for years she has always wanted a little bistro of her own. She doesn't want to compete with Adam or Shappa but maybe enhance the dining experience of Nether Kipping?
I do believe Chloe found herself in trouble with Adam and his paddle for that party she and the girls threw and I loved it, don't think Chloe did though.
No, Chloe would not like that one bit I'm afraid.
I see Jack convinced Jen in letting Ethan go to Brazil but not without supervision with Jack, Chris and Andy along for the ride and sounds like Kevin is all for the idea as well.
Yep, and it gives us something to write about later on. OF course that will have to be after a few others are done.
I am surprised that when Chris set the smoke detector off by killing the tea kettle that the alarm didn't go off at the Fire Station bringing Kevin and brigade to Jack's house. I see Trevor couldn't stay out of trouble either with Jack and he showed Trevor just how he felt about disrespecting Pru and her undergarments with that infamous cane, that even sounding nasty and very painful even to me.
Jack is cane happy. We might even find out why later on, you never know. I think Chris, Trevor Ethan and Aled should go on holiday together and maybe take Joseph with them. Jack would have to behave for a little while then lol!
Whenever I get the time to read the next new story you sent I will be sending you more feedback for that one. I am so happy that you are feeling much better now and that things are just perfect with you and Adam. I read about you taking a break from writing maybe until September and I don't blame you one bit. Believe me if I get to missing your stories I will go back and reread the ones I have saved on my computer in my documents and to let you know I am seriously thinking about buying one or more of the books in the near future. Looking forward to reading the next story when I get the time and I hope you and Adam have a good time on vacation.
Mary Anne
New ones are being thought about and hoepfully put to paper soonish. You hold that thought on buying though. I am revising at the beginninbg of the year and we now have the option to discount. I will keep you posted.
I have finally gotten around to reading this fist new story you sent and I wanted to let you know that I thoroughly loved and enjoyed reading it with a passion. I see Ethan was up to his tricks again with the chocolate cake thanks to Trevor and it sounded like when Jen found out she was not a very happy doctor and she let Ethan, Travis, Chloe and Trevor know it as well by contacting Jack and making sure he took care of Ethan and boy did he and I see that over the knee cane is history and decorating Jack's garden for that I know Ethan, Andy, Chris and Trevor are grateful for.
Jack takes his resposibilities seriously and possibly moreso since that "talk" with his dada few stories back.
Jen knows just where to hit so it hurts doesn't she.
As far as Travis, Chloe and Trevor they were keeping Adam's corners company in the cafe and I loved it. Looks like Adam's talk with Callum about his and Travis's relationship has changed them for the better and now Callum gets to be home more and Travis don't have to feel like a lodger anymore. I guess we can safely say the *barn raising* was a success all the way around. Good thing both Callum and Travis know how to cook because is sounds like Stella and Beatrice are going their own way and Stella won't be working for Callum and Travis anymore.
Everyone moves on at some time and even though Stella has been with Callum for years she has always wanted a little bistro of her own. She doesn't want to compete with Adam or Shappa but maybe enhance the dining experience of Nether Kipping?
I do believe Chloe found herself in trouble with Adam and his paddle for that party she and the girls threw and I loved it, don't think Chloe did though.
No, Chloe would not like that one bit I'm afraid.
I see Jack convinced Jen in letting Ethan go to Brazil but not without supervision with Jack, Chris and Andy along for the ride and sounds like Kevin is all for the idea as well.
Yep, and it gives us something to write about later on. OF course that will have to be after a few others are done.
I am surprised that when Chris set the smoke detector off by killing the tea kettle that the alarm didn't go off at the Fire Station bringing Kevin and brigade to Jack's house. I see Trevor couldn't stay out of trouble either with Jack and he showed Trevor just how he felt about disrespecting Pru and her undergarments with that infamous cane, that even sounding nasty and very painful even to me.
Jack is cane happy. We might even find out why later on, you never know. I think Chris, Trevor Ethan and Aled should go on holiday together and maybe take Joseph with them. Jack would have to behave for a little while then lol!
Whenever I get the time to read the next new story you sent I will be sending you more feedback for that one. I am so happy that you are feeling much better now and that things are just perfect with you and Adam. I read about you taking a break from writing maybe until September and I don't blame you one bit. Believe me if I get to missing your stories I will go back and reread the ones I have saved on my computer in my documents and to let you know I am seriously thinking about buying one or more of the books in the near future. Looking forward to reading the next story when I get the time and I hope you and Adam have a good time on vacation.
Mary Anne
New ones are being thought about and hoepfully put to paper soonish. You hold that thought on buying though. I am revising at the beginninbg of the year and we now have the option to discount. I will keep you posted.
Workin For Da Man
Caleb,
Thank you for sending me this most exciting and in some ways hilarious story and I loved it with a complete passion. I am so happy that you sent this story this way because I tries to read the feedback you sent me in reference to the re,re humph one and all I got was a bunch of squiggly lines and boxes in between some of the words I could make out so I ended up deleting the file that I downloaded it with.
It could be our downloads are not compatible,lol!
Anyway on with the story, just wanted to let you know that you made my day err night more pleasurable with this new story and I loved it a lot. You weren't kidding when you said that I would be surprised as to whom both Joseph and Jacob would end up with and boy was I because I knew they were both brats from just reading about them and now here is Devlin with Joseph and Jason with Jacob, twins with twins who would have figured,
We gave that few days thought. I used to think it was so cliche when I would hear real life twins marryin twins but hey, we can be cliche too apparently.
didn't even know Devlin was a Top until I read this but I suspected Jason of being one and what a way to get a brat real fast in Jason and Jacob's case meeting at a get together for doctors and having sex within 10 minutes of meeting eachother now that was fast and I loved it.
Frankly it happens that way a lot in our circle, not the getting together bit but the sex. I hate to say it but in the gay community it stll is a lot of sex in corners type thing. Fortunately, Jason, (who by the way gets a name change later on as we decided we weren't that keen on either Devlin or Jason for names lol) is an honourable man and made an honest one of Jacob.
Poor Jason though he was so confused when he went to meet Devlin's partner for the first time and thinking that Jacob was two timing Devlin, I don't think he was very happy about that
No he certainly was not a happy doctor at that time was he? It all worked out though in the end.
and poor Joseph taking the heat so to speak for Jacob's behavior from Devlin and Joseph not even trying to correct him at that time as it was when Jason confronted Jacob in the Cafe about the two timing and not even trying to deny that either until it got to the point where Jacob was upset and getting louder and bring Adam out and his glare put Jason in his place and Jacob finally telling Jason about his twin brother Joseph and both Devlin and Jason finally getting to meet Joseph and Jacob at the same time so then they had no reason not to believe the boys then.
LOL I think I followed that. Yes, Joseph did take a lot of heat for his brother I will admit but I'm pretty sure he was more pissed at Jacob when he found out than Devlin (who gets a name change too).
I think that Dev and Jay will have their hands full with Joey and Jake don't you?
The poker party was a trip even in my book from Charlie smacking Ethan to Jen and Melanie showing up and having Ethan call the rest of the lesbians to invite them to Jack's poker party to Melanie trying to get Chris in trouble with Jack, to Jude running out of the room yelling for Tristan telling him that Caleb was killing Chloe and the one that takes the cake was Caleb throwing up on Chloe and Chloe throwing up on Caleb. Hmm I wonder what the shriek that was heard throughout Jack's house was about and let's hope that the candles that Chris and Emily lit won't catch anything on fire although there is some firefighters in the house with Kevin and Aled but I don't think it would help unless they had they firetruck there.
Okay one at a time here, I haven't read this again so I'm winging it! I wasn't too sure who was more upset, Charlie or Ethan over that. I think maybe Charlie.
My poor confused Top gets himself in such predicaments,although he would move mountains for Jack, I'm sure.
Melanie is going to be trouble I can see it now. God help us if her and Chloe become friends!
I'm not sure that even fire is brave enough to risk pissing Kevin off when he is relaxing.
I just loved the stories that the Tops were telling about what happened with the brats but the one that stood out was Melanie trying to make Tacos at 3 in the morning and getting distracted by a whimpering dog and setting the house on fire and Jen waking up to Kevin standing over her and her out on the lawn in here nightgown, good thing she don't sleep in her birthday suit now that would have not only the neighbors talking but the firefighters as well.
IF anyone could pull off the whole "I'm in my birthday suit and it does not bother me" thing it would be Jen I think. She doesn't seem to ruffle easily. Of course it could be the whole specialist thing and she even has Jack on her team, now that's a feat.
Most definitely looking forward to reading more of your amazing stories very soon, yea I know it will probably be later on this month or even next month but you can't blame a girl for trying though. I still have these two that you sent to be to reread if I get bored and want to read them again, at least that will keep me occupied until you send more. Thank you so much for sending me the stories you know exactly how to make my day or night much more better.
Mary Anne
We're slow now I admit but we will get them to you darlin.
Thank you for sending me this most exciting and in some ways hilarious story and I loved it with a complete passion. I am so happy that you sent this story this way because I tries to read the feedback you sent me in reference to the re,re humph one and all I got was a bunch of squiggly lines and boxes in between some of the words I could make out so I ended up deleting the file that I downloaded it with.
It could be our downloads are not compatible,lol!
Anyway on with the story, just wanted to let you know that you made my day err night more pleasurable with this new story and I loved it a lot. You weren't kidding when you said that I would be surprised as to whom both Joseph and Jacob would end up with and boy was I because I knew they were both brats from just reading about them and now here is Devlin with Joseph and Jason with Jacob, twins with twins who would have figured,
We gave that few days thought. I used to think it was so cliche when I would hear real life twins marryin twins but hey, we can be cliche too apparently.
didn't even know Devlin was a Top until I read this but I suspected Jason of being one and what a way to get a brat real fast in Jason and Jacob's case meeting at a get together for doctors and having sex within 10 minutes of meeting eachother now that was fast and I loved it.
Frankly it happens that way a lot in our circle, not the getting together bit but the sex. I hate to say it but in the gay community it stll is a lot of sex in corners type thing. Fortunately, Jason, (who by the way gets a name change later on as we decided we weren't that keen on either Devlin or Jason for names lol) is an honourable man and made an honest one of Jacob.
Poor Jason though he was so confused when he went to meet Devlin's partner for the first time and thinking that Jacob was two timing Devlin, I don't think he was very happy about that
No he certainly was not a happy doctor at that time was he? It all worked out though in the end.
and poor Joseph taking the heat so to speak for Jacob's behavior from Devlin and Joseph not even trying to correct him at that time as it was when Jason confronted Jacob in the Cafe about the two timing and not even trying to deny that either until it got to the point where Jacob was upset and getting louder and bring Adam out and his glare put Jason in his place and Jacob finally telling Jason about his twin brother Joseph and both Devlin and Jason finally getting to meet Joseph and Jacob at the same time so then they had no reason not to believe the boys then.
LOL I think I followed that. Yes, Joseph did take a lot of heat for his brother I will admit but I'm pretty sure he was more pissed at Jacob when he found out than Devlin (who gets a name change too).
I think that Dev and Jay will have their hands full with Joey and Jake don't you?
The poker party was a trip even in my book from Charlie smacking Ethan to Jen and Melanie showing up and having Ethan call the rest of the lesbians to invite them to Jack's poker party to Melanie trying to get Chris in trouble with Jack, to Jude running out of the room yelling for Tristan telling him that Caleb was killing Chloe and the one that takes the cake was Caleb throwing up on Chloe and Chloe throwing up on Caleb. Hmm I wonder what the shriek that was heard throughout Jack's house was about and let's hope that the candles that Chris and Emily lit won't catch anything on fire although there is some firefighters in the house with Kevin and Aled but I don't think it would help unless they had they firetruck there.
Okay one at a time here, I haven't read this again so I'm winging it! I wasn't too sure who was more upset, Charlie or Ethan over that. I think maybe Charlie.
My poor confused Top gets himself in such predicaments,although he would move mountains for Jack, I'm sure.
Melanie is going to be trouble I can see it now. God help us if her and Chloe become friends!
I'm not sure that even fire is brave enough to risk pissing Kevin off when he is relaxing.
I just loved the stories that the Tops were telling about what happened with the brats but the one that stood out was Melanie trying to make Tacos at 3 in the morning and getting distracted by a whimpering dog and setting the house on fire and Jen waking up to Kevin standing over her and her out on the lawn in here nightgown, good thing she don't sleep in her birthday suit now that would have not only the neighbors talking but the firefighters as well.
IF anyone could pull off the whole "I'm in my birthday suit and it does not bother me" thing it would be Jen I think. She doesn't seem to ruffle easily. Of course it could be the whole specialist thing and she even has Jack on her team, now that's a feat.
Most definitely looking forward to reading more of your amazing stories very soon, yea I know it will probably be later on this month or even next month but you can't blame a girl for trying though. I still have these two that you sent to be to reread if I get bored and want to read them again, at least that will keep me occupied until you send more. Thank you so much for sending me the stories you know exactly how to make my day or night much more better.
Mary Anne
We're slow now I admit but we will get them to you darlin.
Tuesday, 27 April 2010
Mary Anne (Good Bye Norma Jean)
Hi Caleb,
Just wanted to let you know that I have just got around to reading this magnificent and most enjoyable story. Where to start, I just love to whole idea of Jack treating Ethan like a brat because that is exactly what he needed a good kick or should I say paddle to his butt several times for the way he has been acting and not taking care of himself as far as his health goes and Andy as well.
(LOL I suppose you may be right but if you thin about it Ethan wasn't out to do himsef a harm. It happened because of his emotional make up.
As Jack said, he isn't in love any longer with Ethan but he loves him dearly and will not let anything happen to him.)
I think Chris gave Andy the right idea to go an a holiday because he and Ethan definitely needed a break from each other so they could get their priorities together for what they want from each other and Chris was the best brat to go with him to try and help keep him on the straight and narrow.
(I don't know about straight and narrow but Chris would have to face Jack when they got back and that can be a very big influence on behaviour, especially after Holland.)
Loved the way Chris took charge and paddled Andy for taking that drug when he didn't know what it was he was taking.
(I think Chris was as un nerved as Andy by it and there could be repercussions at a later date.)
The part where Damon and Declan showed up at the hotel was indeed a surprise to both Chris and Andy with them thinking they were axe murderers and calling to police, they found out real quick that they were not and that Damon and Declan were exactly who they were.
(Imaginations running wild I think. Ethan and Jack need to vet their movies for a while it seems.)
I bet both of the brats were very happy to be home with Jack and Ethan as well as the tops themselves. I loved the addition of Ben and Erik to the group and Callum telling Erik what he was a top and Ben the brat and it sounds like to me that Ben was indeed a brat and Callum knew exactly what Erik needed to do to get through to Ben and boy for a person not spanked anyone in his life Erik knew exactly what to do and how to handle Adam's paddle with skills.
(Yeah, lol. I think it's hard wired into them. Hopefully there will be more with Erik and Ben in the future.)
Tom and Caleb decided they needed to get away as well and on the way Tom's car went is last miles until it gets to a hospital and back on it's four wheels again and feeling better but I am wondering what happened with them the last I heard of them they were fighting that woman to be let out of the car and got out and they finally got a single and called someone, that's the last I saw of them so I bet in the Epilog Liam was indeed worrying what happened to Caleb. I wonder what Adam finally told him where he was.
(I'm sure they had a lovely holiday once they got to Cornwall. But did Caleb meet any hippies?)
The part where Jack talked Declan into letting Edward be a naughty brat along with Ethan was a surprise to me when he agreed to it and that is another thing Ethan needed to be allowed to play with Edward again, I guess we can say that Edward got lucky this go around and didn't get into trouble for his drinking but Ethan did and I loved it.
(Edward did indeed luck out as you say. He had to know what Ethan was capable of and so did Jack and Declan.)
Thank you for sending this story to me and I can't wait to read more of your amazing stories very soon.
(As soon as I get the next one on the memory stick I will mail it along to you.)
Mary Anne
Just wanted to let you know that I have just got around to reading this magnificent and most enjoyable story. Where to start, I just love to whole idea of Jack treating Ethan like a brat because that is exactly what he needed a good kick or should I say paddle to his butt several times for the way he has been acting and not taking care of himself as far as his health goes and Andy as well.
(LOL I suppose you may be right but if you thin about it Ethan wasn't out to do himsef a harm. It happened because of his emotional make up.
As Jack said, he isn't in love any longer with Ethan but he loves him dearly and will not let anything happen to him.)
I think Chris gave Andy the right idea to go an a holiday because he and Ethan definitely needed a break from each other so they could get their priorities together for what they want from each other and Chris was the best brat to go with him to try and help keep him on the straight and narrow.
(I don't know about straight and narrow but Chris would have to face Jack when they got back and that can be a very big influence on behaviour, especially after Holland.)
Loved the way Chris took charge and paddled Andy for taking that drug when he didn't know what it was he was taking.
(I think Chris was as un nerved as Andy by it and there could be repercussions at a later date.)
The part where Damon and Declan showed up at the hotel was indeed a surprise to both Chris and Andy with them thinking they were axe murderers and calling to police, they found out real quick that they were not and that Damon and Declan were exactly who they were.
(Imaginations running wild I think. Ethan and Jack need to vet their movies for a while it seems.)
I bet both of the brats were very happy to be home with Jack and Ethan as well as the tops themselves. I loved the addition of Ben and Erik to the group and Callum telling Erik what he was a top and Ben the brat and it sounds like to me that Ben was indeed a brat and Callum knew exactly what Erik needed to do to get through to Ben and boy for a person not spanked anyone in his life Erik knew exactly what to do and how to handle Adam's paddle with skills.
(Yeah, lol. I think it's hard wired into them. Hopefully there will be more with Erik and Ben in the future.)
Tom and Caleb decided they needed to get away as well and on the way Tom's car went is last miles until it gets to a hospital and back on it's four wheels again and feeling better but I am wondering what happened with them the last I heard of them they were fighting that woman to be let out of the car and got out and they finally got a single and called someone, that's the last I saw of them so I bet in the Epilog Liam was indeed worrying what happened to Caleb. I wonder what Adam finally told him where he was.
(I'm sure they had a lovely holiday once they got to Cornwall. But did Caleb meet any hippies?)
The part where Jack talked Declan into letting Edward be a naughty brat along with Ethan was a surprise to me when he agreed to it and that is another thing Ethan needed to be allowed to play with Edward again, I guess we can say that Edward got lucky this go around and didn't get into trouble for his drinking but Ethan did and I loved it.
(Edward did indeed luck out as you say. He had to know what Ethan was capable of and so did Jack and Declan.)
Thank you for sending this story to me and I can't wait to read more of your amazing stories very soon.
(As soon as I get the next one on the memory stick I will mail it along to you.)
Mary Anne
Thursday, 15 April 2010
'Splain Me This (Mary Anne)
Caleb,
Well here I am again to thank you for another marvelous new story this month and this one beats hands down. I see you have three more characters to play with in Jason, Jacob and Joseph and I love it.
(Yes we do! The village just keeps growing! Wait till they all go to Centre Parks! Now that should be fun!)
I wonder if Jason will ever quit being so confused with the Village's Top/Brat population, finally understand the lifestyle and settle down with a brat of his own,
(Poor man doesn't really get it does he? Things do have a way of working out though and he should feel the itch soon enough.LOL)
I figure either Jacob or Joseph but I know he will need to be taught what to do and how to live the life but I have a feeling with all the tops running about the Village they will teach him appropriately and he can get in on the fun.
(Okay so you got us there. It is one of them true enough. Oh, just wait till you see how he gets taught girl!)
Man sounds like Jack was on the swatting team this month with most if not all the brats this go around and I loved it a lot, funny though how Jason was around at the same time that the brats were getting into mischief and Jack coming along and swatting when needed.
(Funny? LOL Good it is intrigal to the next story on them so remember this bit!)
Now the brat that takes first place in my book was Aled taking a bubble bath in the middle of the square and second would be Edward and Aled on the riding lawn mower and Edward flying over Aled's head and thank goodness he didn't get hurt with that stunt, that fits Edward to a tee there because afterall Edward is a pilot but he flies airplanes not himself and a skateboard.
(Yes, those two pranks seemed to have been the highlight for everyone. I can't imagine why lol!
I think Edward will stick to flying planes, although not right now. We are in lockdown due to a volcano erupting in Iceland. It has sent clouds all over Europe and no planes can fly at present.)
Most definitely looking forward to reading the next or (sad to say it) last story for this month but I look at it this way April is around the corner and that means be being more closer to more fantastic new stories to read.
Mary Anne
Well here I am again to thank you for another marvelous new story this month and this one beats hands down. I see you have three more characters to play with in Jason, Jacob and Joseph and I love it.
(Yes we do! The village just keeps growing! Wait till they all go to Centre Parks! Now that should be fun!)
I wonder if Jason will ever quit being so confused with the Village's Top/Brat population, finally understand the lifestyle and settle down with a brat of his own,
(Poor man doesn't really get it does he? Things do have a way of working out though and he should feel the itch soon enough.LOL)
I figure either Jacob or Joseph but I know he will need to be taught what to do and how to live the life but I have a feeling with all the tops running about the Village they will teach him appropriately and he can get in on the fun.
(Okay so you got us there. It is one of them true enough. Oh, just wait till you see how he gets taught girl!)
Man sounds like Jack was on the swatting team this month with most if not all the brats this go around and I loved it a lot, funny though how Jason was around at the same time that the brats were getting into mischief and Jack coming along and swatting when needed.
(Funny? LOL Good it is intrigal to the next story on them so remember this bit!)
Now the brat that takes first place in my book was Aled taking a bubble bath in the middle of the square and second would be Edward and Aled on the riding lawn mower and Edward flying over Aled's head and thank goodness he didn't get hurt with that stunt, that fits Edward to a tee there because afterall Edward is a pilot but he flies airplanes not himself and a skateboard.
(Yes, those two pranks seemed to have been the highlight for everyone. I can't imagine why lol!
I think Edward will stick to flying planes, although not right now. We are in lockdown due to a volcano erupting in Iceland. It has sent clouds all over Europe and no planes can fly at present.)
Most definitely looking forward to reading the next or (sad to say it) last story for this month but I look at it this way April is around the corner and that means be being more closer to more fantastic new stories to read.
Mary Anne
Charlies Meltdown (Mary Anne)
Hi Caleb,
I hope this finds you and Adam well and I hope and pray the marriage was a success if by now you two have gotten married.
(It was a glorious day, the sun was out and everything! We had a lovely time and the food from the caterer was gorgeous!)
Thank you for another astounding and magnificent story and I thoroughly loved and enjoyed reading it and you made me smile and much more happier especially after the fist two weeks or so of March.
(You are more than welcome M.A.)
Sounds like Tops in Charlie's case did indeed have a breakdown and needed the help and advice from Callum to get through it and now that he has I bet he will be a better top for Aled and keep him on the straight and narrow from now on and hopefully Charlie won't let the others get him down again.
( He is still relatively new to the whole lifestyle and I can see where he might think his techniques are out there in the limelight for all to criticise. Hopefully Callum has set the record straight for him but if he needs to talk our director is always available with a shoulder.)
I do believe that is what Aled needed himself as far as his brat status goes and I bet he will be much more happier as well but after a couple of months of Charlie being more stricter on him he will think twice about his status when he is sporting a very sore butt for longer periods of time than he was but then again maybe not.
(Aled, like any brat pretty much takes things in his stride. Contraty to what you read elswhere, brats are not always looking for trouble, acting like toddlers, or just being plain stupid lol!
He will be happier with closer monitoring though just like any brat.)
Getting ready to read the next new story that was posted and you will be hearing from me once again about that one.
Mary Anne
I hope this finds you and Adam well and I hope and pray the marriage was a success if by now you two have gotten married.
(It was a glorious day, the sun was out and everything! We had a lovely time and the food from the caterer was gorgeous!)
Thank you for another astounding and magnificent story and I thoroughly loved and enjoyed reading it and you made me smile and much more happier especially after the fist two weeks or so of March.
(You are more than welcome M.A.)
Sounds like Tops in Charlie's case did indeed have a breakdown and needed the help and advice from Callum to get through it and now that he has I bet he will be a better top for Aled and keep him on the straight and narrow from now on and hopefully Charlie won't let the others get him down again.
( He is still relatively new to the whole lifestyle and I can see where he might think his techniques are out there in the limelight for all to criticise. Hopefully Callum has set the record straight for him but if he needs to talk our director is always available with a shoulder.)
I do believe that is what Aled needed himself as far as his brat status goes and I bet he will be much more happier as well but after a couple of months of Charlie being more stricter on him he will think twice about his status when he is sporting a very sore butt for longer periods of time than he was but then again maybe not.
(Aled, like any brat pretty much takes things in his stride. Contraty to what you read elswhere, brats are not always looking for trouble, acting like toddlers, or just being plain stupid lol!
He will be happier with closer monitoring though just like any brat.)
Getting ready to read the next new story that was posted and you will be hearing from me once again about that one.
Mary Anne
Monday, 22 February 2010
Mary Anne (How To Corrupt A Brat)
Hi Caleb,
Just wanted to let you know that I have just got through reading this second new story and I enjoyed it immensely,
(Great! Thats what we love to hear! Thanks!)
sounds like Ethan and Andy had a fun time partying with all of Jack's and Ethan's friends except for the Tequila incident.
(Tequila is a horrible thing. It bites you in the ass and keeps coming back for days. The one experience I had with it I was sick for three days!)
Granny sounds like a very friendly and nice woman and anyone would be happy to have her as a friend, I know I would.
(Granny is and she has taken a shine to both Jack and Ethan and now Andy too. Lovely lady.)
I wonder what Jack is thinking when Andy told him of the things that went on while he and Ethan were on holiday, well almost everything.
(Oh, since Ethan rang him and told him he planned on misbehaving I have a feeling that the flat saw a little bit of action not to long after Ethan and Andy returned. LOL)
Most definitely looking forward to reading the next set of stories I am guessing next month around the 16th or if we are lucky more this month.
(Yep the 16th is the day dear. Sorry no more this month. We have the March stories ready to go and I think we are working on April now. I can't remember we have so much on our plate at the moment.)
By the way how are the wedding plans coming with you and Adam. Don't know if you will get this through this web address or not if you do good luck with the
marriage.
(We have everything we need and the food is going to be bought this week I think. Maybe next week. We are having a party afterwards that evening for everyone who didn't come to the ceremony itself.
we hadn't even thought about flowers and now we are pricing those too! I keep telling Adam we should just elope but unfortunately there was only one place for that and it no longer allows it either. Remind sometime and I will tell you the history of Gretna Green.)
Just wanted to let you know that I have just got through reading this second new story and I enjoyed it immensely,
(Great! Thats what we love to hear! Thanks!)
sounds like Ethan and Andy had a fun time partying with all of Jack's and Ethan's friends except for the Tequila incident.
(Tequila is a horrible thing. It bites you in the ass and keeps coming back for days. The one experience I had with it I was sick for three days!)
Granny sounds like a very friendly and nice woman and anyone would be happy to have her as a friend, I know I would.
(Granny is and she has taken a shine to both Jack and Ethan and now Andy too. Lovely lady.)
I wonder what Jack is thinking when Andy told him of the things that went on while he and Ethan were on holiday, well almost everything.
(Oh, since Ethan rang him and told him he planned on misbehaving I have a feeling that the flat saw a little bit of action not to long after Ethan and Andy returned. LOL)
Most definitely looking forward to reading the next set of stories I am guessing next month around the 16th or if we are lucky more this month.
(Yep the 16th is the day dear. Sorry no more this month. We have the March stories ready to go and I think we are working on April now. I can't remember we have so much on our plate at the moment.)
By the way how are the wedding plans coming with you and Adam. Don't know if you will get this through this web address or not if you do good luck with the
marriage.
(We have everything we need and the food is going to be bought this week I think. Maybe next week. We are having a party afterwards that evening for everyone who didn't come to the ceremony itself.
we hadn't even thought about flowers and now we are pricing those too! I keep telling Adam we should just elope but unfortunately there was only one place for that and it no longer allows it either. Remind sometime and I will tell you the history of Gretna Green.)
Mary Anne (Lollipops and Lullabyes)
Caleb,
I don't know if you will get this with the new web address or not but here goes.
(Yep, I'm keeping the yahoo one until they figure out how ot keep the address book up and running. Danes!!!!
I have just got through reading this first new story and let me tell you that I enjoyed reading it with a passion. Looks like Trevor is getting more human emotions now and that talk with Jeff was this precious.
(Jeff can be understanding, he's had alot of practice with his sons. I would think that would be confusing to a demon as much as an angel although Trevor seems to be having a few more problems with emotion than Danyiel. Must be the whole demon thing.)
Demon or not Jeff in a way has feelings for Trevor and he will help him get through this new situation just like he would any other brat that is having problems.
(Jeff can be a good sounding block and he would be the first to tell you like it is whether you wanted to hear it or not. He would also be there to pick up the pieces I'm sure.)
I think Danyiel has the right idea my making Trevor feel his spankings from now on so he will indeed feel what the other brats feel when they are spanked.
(It wasn't so much so that he felt the pain that the others did but the fact that it was very hard to get through to him any other way. He doesn't like it at all and is still balking at it.)
Looking forward to reading the next story you have sent and written. At first I was a little confused about the dates on the new story the story Lollipops and Lullabies on Michael and Trevor's blog has a date of Sunday January 10th 2010 and not a February date but I knew it was the new one, just letting you know in case something comes up with other readers concerning the date when it was posted.
(Thats' because as soon as they are done they go on a memory stick. The memory stick goes upstairs and when I get around to it I load them on the computer and then at some point publish them to the blog for the following 16th. SO the date you get is the one where I put them on hold.)
Mary Anne
I don't know if you will get this with the new web address or not but here goes.
(Yep, I'm keeping the yahoo one until they figure out how ot keep the address book up and running. Danes!!!!
I have just got through reading this first new story and let me tell you that I enjoyed reading it with a passion. Looks like Trevor is getting more human emotions now and that talk with Jeff was this precious.
(Jeff can be understanding, he's had alot of practice with his sons. I would think that would be confusing to a demon as much as an angel although Trevor seems to be having a few more problems with emotion than Danyiel. Must be the whole demon thing.)
Demon or not Jeff in a way has feelings for Trevor and he will help him get through this new situation just like he would any other brat that is having problems.
(Jeff can be a good sounding block and he would be the first to tell you like it is whether you wanted to hear it or not. He would also be there to pick up the pieces I'm sure.)
I think Danyiel has the right idea my making Trevor feel his spankings from now on so he will indeed feel what the other brats feel when they are spanked.
(It wasn't so much so that he felt the pain that the others did but the fact that it was very hard to get through to him any other way. He doesn't like it at all and is still balking at it.)
Looking forward to reading the next story you have sent and written. At first I was a little confused about the dates on the new story the story Lollipops and Lullabies on Michael and Trevor's blog has a date of Sunday January 10th 2010 and not a February date but I knew it was the new one, just letting you know in case something comes up with other readers concerning the date when it was posted.
(Thats' because as soon as they are done they go on a memory stick. The memory stick goes upstairs and when I get around to it I load them on the computer and then at some point publish them to the blog for the following 16th. SO the date you get is the one where I put them on hold.)
Mary Anne
Tuesday, 16 February 2010
Mary Anne (Desolution...Righteousness)
Caleb,
WOW can we say this was amazing and eyes wide open reading. At first I didn't know who Quinn was and come to find out he was another demon even more evil than Trevor and I was on the edge of my seat reading about him and wonder what on earth would another demon be there in the village when they already had one demon and one angel.
(Quinn was not just any demon Hon, he was Lucifer himself. And yes, why another one indeed?)
When I read that everyone in the village died I was thinking what are you trying to do to me with this and believe me I was in tears.
(Don't tell anyone but so was Adam. Me I knew how it was going to end so my eyes were dry. I am glad that it had the desired affect though.)
Then I was more than surprised to find out that Michael was an Angel/white lighter as well which I had no clue about and when the lights glowed white again and I found out that he brought everyone back to life, I dried my tears and was bouncing in my chair with joy and happiness once again and I hope once and for all that Michael banished Quinn for good and we will not hear, read or see him anymore.
(What a mouthful, lol, Michael is not just any angel though, he is an Arch angel and the righteousness of God, you may remember him from his casting of Lucifer into the pit days in the Bible.
I can't say he has banished Quinn for always, there is a story about that I'msure you've read a few times called Revelation.)
It's a shame that Michael had to erase the memories of Danyiel and Trevor knowing about him and what he is but I totally understand why he did it.
(Yeah, since Michael chooses to remain human for this little jaunt it wouldn't do for Danyiel and Trevor to remember who he really is would it?)
Now hopefully that Quinn is gone for good the village can get back to normal for all Tops and Brats and get about with their business, speaking of business I wonder how Ethan's putting up a house will go and if Andy will enjoy the mini vacation that he and Ethan are going on.
(Business as usual will be going on I'm sure.
Ethan will have a fine time and I'm sure Andy will too.)
I didn't even know Caleb was in training to become a firefighter so that was a surprise to me when Kevin told Adam that he will have both Aled and Caleb at work, Kevin plus two brats to look after, I bet they keep him on his toes big time,
(Kevin may need sympathy.)
I wonder if Caleb will ever get over his fear of heights probably not but they will keep working with him to help. Now that was a memorable picture etched in my brain Kevin pulling the hose and cleaning up puke, poor Jeff and his shoes, I guess he forgot to jump back or else Caleb forgot to turn the other way before spilling the contents of his stomach.
(Kevin takes it all in stride by now and Jeff will get over it I'm sure. Now if it had been Jack and Aled's dad Jeff, maybe not lol.)
Thank you for sending me this other new story to read and It was a pleasure to read and just what I needed to put my mind at ease for a little while at least. Most definitely cannot wait to read more of your amazing stories whenever there are more posted.
(We aims to please. I know now that things are working out and that puts my mind at ease too and you already have the email with the links to the new stories up!)
Mary Anne
WOW can we say this was amazing and eyes wide open reading. At first I didn't know who Quinn was and come to find out he was another demon even more evil than Trevor and I was on the edge of my seat reading about him and wonder what on earth would another demon be there in the village when they already had one demon and one angel.
(Quinn was not just any demon Hon, he was Lucifer himself. And yes, why another one indeed?)
When I read that everyone in the village died I was thinking what are you trying to do to me with this and believe me I was in tears.
(Don't tell anyone but so was Adam. Me I knew how it was going to end so my eyes were dry. I am glad that it had the desired affect though.)
Then I was more than surprised to find out that Michael was an Angel/white lighter as well which I had no clue about and when the lights glowed white again and I found out that he brought everyone back to life, I dried my tears and was bouncing in my chair with joy and happiness once again and I hope once and for all that Michael banished Quinn for good and we will not hear, read or see him anymore.
(What a mouthful, lol, Michael is not just any angel though, he is an Arch angel and the righteousness of God, you may remember him from his casting of Lucifer into the pit days in the Bible.
I can't say he has banished Quinn for always, there is a story about that I'msure you've read a few times called Revelation.)
It's a shame that Michael had to erase the memories of Danyiel and Trevor knowing about him and what he is but I totally understand why he did it.
(Yeah, since Michael chooses to remain human for this little jaunt it wouldn't do for Danyiel and Trevor to remember who he really is would it?)
Now hopefully that Quinn is gone for good the village can get back to normal for all Tops and Brats and get about with their business, speaking of business I wonder how Ethan's putting up a house will go and if Andy will enjoy the mini vacation that he and Ethan are going on.
(Business as usual will be going on I'm sure.
Ethan will have a fine time and I'm sure Andy will too.)
I didn't even know Caleb was in training to become a firefighter so that was a surprise to me when Kevin told Adam that he will have both Aled and Caleb at work, Kevin plus two brats to look after, I bet they keep him on his toes big time,
(Kevin may need sympathy.)
I wonder if Caleb will ever get over his fear of heights probably not but they will keep working with him to help. Now that was a memorable picture etched in my brain Kevin pulling the hose and cleaning up puke, poor Jeff and his shoes, I guess he forgot to jump back or else Caleb forgot to turn the other way before spilling the contents of his stomach.
(Kevin takes it all in stride by now and Jeff will get over it I'm sure. Now if it had been Jack and Aled's dad Jeff, maybe not lol.)
Thank you for sending me this other new story to read and It was a pleasure to read and just what I needed to put my mind at ease for a little while at least. Most definitely cannot wait to read more of your amazing stories whenever there are more posted.
(We aims to please. I know now that things are working out and that puts my mind at ease too and you already have the email with the links to the new stories up!)
Mary Anne
Mary Anne (Crisis)
Caleb,
Thank you for making my night much more happier with this e-mail and one of the Valentine's stories and let me tell you this is exactly what I needed to bring me out of the doldrums so to speak.
(Then I am very glad that I sent this to you!)
((Big part that was personal)).
Anyway getting back to this first new story I wanted to let you know that I enjoyed reading this story with a passion. Man I was wondering myself what in the world got into Caleb and why was he acting the way he was, locking Adam in the store room, vandalizing the boxes that contain the power to the Village, I knew something won't right about that and now I know why thanks to Danyiel.
(I'm not sure that Caleb knew why either. He remembered it though.)
Trevor did it and I loved Danyiel's gift to Michael taking away Trevor's pleasure of enjoying pain, now he knows truly what it is like being a naughty brat that needs his backside roasted and I for one hope Danyiel's gift is permanent and not just temporary because in my opinion that is exactly what Trevor needs now to keep him on the straight and narrow for the time being.
(Unfortunately everyone seems to wonder if the gift is permament or temporary. No decision has been made on that at this point. You'll have to stay tuned.)
Something tells me that Caleb isn't going to get off so easy either and I don't think he is going to enjoy the consequences of his actions at all for his behavior Trevor or not.
(I can't see Adam just turning his head over this whether Caleb was ultimately responsible for it all or not. Tempted does not mean that you have to follow through after all.)
I can't wait to read the next new Valentine story you sent to me to see what that will be about and yes I needed this to get lost in and just to enjoy a good story for awhile at least.
(Again I am glad that it helped and hope to hear from you soon!)
Mary Anne
Thank you for making my night much more happier with this e-mail and one of the Valentine's stories and let me tell you this is exactly what I needed to bring me out of the doldrums so to speak.
(Then I am very glad that I sent this to you!)
((Big part that was personal)).
Anyway getting back to this first new story I wanted to let you know that I enjoyed reading this story with a passion. Man I was wondering myself what in the world got into Caleb and why was he acting the way he was, locking Adam in the store room, vandalizing the boxes that contain the power to the Village, I knew something won't right about that and now I know why thanks to Danyiel.
(I'm not sure that Caleb knew why either. He remembered it though.)
Trevor did it and I loved Danyiel's gift to Michael taking away Trevor's pleasure of enjoying pain, now he knows truly what it is like being a naughty brat that needs his backside roasted and I for one hope Danyiel's gift is permanent and not just temporary because in my opinion that is exactly what Trevor needs now to keep him on the straight and narrow for the time being.
(Unfortunately everyone seems to wonder if the gift is permament or temporary. No decision has been made on that at this point. You'll have to stay tuned.)
Something tells me that Caleb isn't going to get off so easy either and I don't think he is going to enjoy the consequences of his actions at all for his behavior Trevor or not.
(I can't see Adam just turning his head over this whether Caleb was ultimately responsible for it all or not. Tempted does not mean that you have to follow through after all.)
I can't wait to read the next new Valentine story you sent to me to see what that will be about and yes I needed this to get lost in and just to enjoy a good story for awhile at least.
(Again I am glad that it helped and hope to hear from you soon!)
Mary Anne
Wednesday, 3 February 2010
Mary Anne (Compromise)
Caleb,
First of all thank you for sending this story directly to my e-mail so I could read and enjoy this story.
(LOL, you are the second person to say that and I didn't honest! Blogger did it!)
Second thank you for writing and posting another one of your magnificent stories and I wanted to let you know that I enjoyed reading it with a passion. Well now looks like Jack's hiatus from Chris bothered him more than he let on and with Chris being a brat and all he acted out and big time.
(Yes Jack took stock of his priorities and I'm sure dealt with Chris in a proper manner.) (( I so said that with a straight face!))
I wonder how Jack is going to keep both Chris and Lucy under control without his hair turning white or falling out in the process.
(I don't think Mr Flanigan will have any problem with the twins at all. LOL)
Hmm sounds like Ethan and Jack are at it again as far as Jack asking Ethan if he needed a spanking and Ethan joking around and say yes, well maybe he won't end up under the spare bed like Chris did.
(Jack wasn't joking though as Ethan found out. Maybe once he's thought about it he might ask Jack what he meant by under the bed though)
Most definitely looking forward to reading more of your amazing stories very soon if we are lucky but if not I will be waiting patiently until next month, well as patient as I can that is.
Mary Anne
First of all thank you for sending this story directly to my e-mail so I could read and enjoy this story.
(LOL, you are the second person to say that and I didn't honest! Blogger did it!)
Second thank you for writing and posting another one of your magnificent stories and I wanted to let you know that I enjoyed reading it with a passion. Well now looks like Jack's hiatus from Chris bothered him more than he let on and with Chris being a brat and all he acted out and big time.
(Yes Jack took stock of his priorities and I'm sure dealt with Chris in a proper manner.) (( I so said that with a straight face!))
I wonder how Jack is going to keep both Chris and Lucy under control without his hair turning white or falling out in the process.
(I don't think Mr Flanigan will have any problem with the twins at all. LOL)
Hmm sounds like Ethan and Jack are at it again as far as Jack asking Ethan if he needed a spanking and Ethan joking around and say yes, well maybe he won't end up under the spare bed like Chris did.
(Jack wasn't joking though as Ethan found out. Maybe once he's thought about it he might ask Jack what he meant by under the bed though)
Most definitely looking forward to reading more of your amazing stories very soon if we are lucky but if not I will be waiting patiently until next month, well as patient as I can that is.
Mary Anne
Mary Anne (The Harder They Fall)
Caleb,
Me again, another amazing story you have here and a pleasure to read. My goodness you had me on pins and needles here with this story, I was just as worried as Nicky and the others were about Damon especially when Dr. Greene explained about Damon not getting enough oxygen and his heart problems.
(Yes, I can understand your concern but as you saw all worked out fine for them)
Thank goodness he got better fast and back home all well again. I bet Jack and Ethan were as happy to be back home as Damon and Nicky were and from the sounds of it Chris was more than happy that Jack was back home as well. Getting ready the read the next story to see what that will be about and yes you will be hearing from me once again I'm afraid with that one.
(Yep everyone is home and happy again although Nicky may never let Damon out of his sight again. Jack was great wasn't he? We got see a side that we don't normally see.)
Mary Anne
Me again, another amazing story you have here and a pleasure to read. My goodness you had me on pins and needles here with this story, I was just as worried as Nicky and the others were about Damon especially when Dr. Greene explained about Damon not getting enough oxygen and his heart problems.
(Yes, I can understand your concern but as you saw all worked out fine for them)
Thank goodness he got better fast and back home all well again. I bet Jack and Ethan were as happy to be back home as Damon and Nicky were and from the sounds of it Chris was more than happy that Jack was back home as well. Getting ready the read the next story to see what that will be about and yes you will be hearing from me once again I'm afraid with that one.
(Yep everyone is home and happy again although Nicky may never let Damon out of his sight again. Jack was great wasn't he? We got see a side that we don't normally see.)
Mary Anne
Mary Anne (Ain't Misbehavin)
Hi Caleb,
I am so happy that Adam called you and reminded you to post the stories for this month yesterday the 19th, because I really needed to have some more of your long awaited magnificent stories to read believe me.
(Then I am right pleased that he did too!)
I have just got through reading the first of the three that were written and posted and I wanted to let you know that I totally loved and enjoyed reading this first story. Sounds like there were a lot of things going on in Nether Kipping this go around with five tops going to the states for some type of meeting, book signing, or conferences, eight crazy tops going camping in the winter and snow and three of the campers ending up getting the flu, to three tops wound up brat sitting for the missing tops.
(Hey now, two of the campers were draftered!)
I though for sure the brats would find themselves in trouble with the temp tops for some reason or another but come to find out neither one of them were well except Aled by finding himself in trouble with Isaac sporting a very sore backside for peeing out of the car window, now that was hilarious.
(Of course it would be Aled but no you are right; they all behaved themselves this time.)
The Saturday Night poker game being held at Jeff and Caroline's house was a surprise and somehow I knew the brats would find themselves in trouble for some reason and from the sounds of it I was right, hmm I wonder who won the contest for the smallest willy, sounds like Jeff scared the mess out of Caleb when he volunteered him for a tawse demonstration for Isaac and Shappa but thank goodness he didn't go through with it,
(Caleb has a fear of belts so I don't think Jeff would want to have him break down and wet himself lol)
I have a feeling that Adam will fix that though after William told him what was going on.
(sadly I believe you are right.)
Isaac surprised me even more when he volunteered himself for Jeff to show him what that thing felt like, don't think he liked it at all after the swat and I bet Oliver is so much happier that Isaac decided not to get one of the horrid things after all.
(Oliver probably thanked whichever god he prays to for that one.)
Man out of the four that got the flu with Travis, Aled, Edward and Damon, Damon is having a heck of a time with it and wound up in the hospital while the others got over it much more quicker except maybe Edward but he is better and weak from it but better than Damon.
(Poor Day, he's really sick I think.)
I bet Nicky is indeed beside himself with worry and upset as well. I hope that Ethan and Andy get to the hospital safe and sound so they can be there for both Damon and Nicky and right now that is mostly what Nicky really needs other than Damon getting better and very quick an out of the hospital back home in his own bed snuggled up with Nicky. Hmm sounds like they all should have gotten the seasonal flu shot and they wouldn't be having a top and brats catching it.
Nicky is definitely beside himself with it all. Ethan will get there and I'm sure Andy will be able to comfort Nicky.
That is exactly what Nicky wants too I'm sure.
Some people can't have those and others don't usually need it and evena few are scared of needles. Wonder where everyone falls in? LOL)
Looking forward to reading the next two new stories, matter of fact I am getting read the read the next one in order after this one to see what that will be about. You will be hearing from me soon I hope.
Mary Anne
I am so happy that Adam called you and reminded you to post the stories for this month yesterday the 19th, because I really needed to have some more of your long awaited magnificent stories to read believe me.
(Then I am right pleased that he did too!)
I have just got through reading the first of the three that were written and posted and I wanted to let you know that I totally loved and enjoyed reading this first story. Sounds like there were a lot of things going on in Nether Kipping this go around with five tops going to the states for some type of meeting, book signing, or conferences, eight crazy tops going camping in the winter and snow and three of the campers ending up getting the flu, to three tops wound up brat sitting for the missing tops.
(Hey now, two of the campers were draftered!)
I though for sure the brats would find themselves in trouble with the temp tops for some reason or another but come to find out neither one of them were well except Aled by finding himself in trouble with Isaac sporting a very sore backside for peeing out of the car window, now that was hilarious.
(Of course it would be Aled but no you are right; they all behaved themselves this time.)
The Saturday Night poker game being held at Jeff and Caroline's house was a surprise and somehow I knew the brats would find themselves in trouble for some reason and from the sounds of it I was right, hmm I wonder who won the contest for the smallest willy, sounds like Jeff scared the mess out of Caleb when he volunteered him for a tawse demonstration for Isaac and Shappa but thank goodness he didn't go through with it,
(Caleb has a fear of belts so I don't think Jeff would want to have him break down and wet himself lol)
I have a feeling that Adam will fix that though after William told him what was going on.
(sadly I believe you are right.)
Isaac surprised me even more when he volunteered himself for Jeff to show him what that thing felt like, don't think he liked it at all after the swat and I bet Oliver is so much happier that Isaac decided not to get one of the horrid things after all.
(Oliver probably thanked whichever god he prays to for that one.)
Man out of the four that got the flu with Travis, Aled, Edward and Damon, Damon is having a heck of a time with it and wound up in the hospital while the others got over it much more quicker except maybe Edward but he is better and weak from it but better than Damon.
(Poor Day, he's really sick I think.)
I bet Nicky is indeed beside himself with worry and upset as well. I hope that Ethan and Andy get to the hospital safe and sound so they can be there for both Damon and Nicky and right now that is mostly what Nicky really needs other than Damon getting better and very quick an out of the hospital back home in his own bed snuggled up with Nicky. Hmm sounds like they all should have gotten the seasonal flu shot and they wouldn't be having a top and brats catching it.
Nicky is definitely beside himself with it all. Ethan will get there and I'm sure Andy will be able to comfort Nicky.
That is exactly what Nicky wants too I'm sure.
Some people can't have those and others don't usually need it and evena few are scared of needles. Wonder where everyone falls in? LOL)
Looking forward to reading the next two new stories, matter of fact I am getting read the read the next one in order after this one to see what that will be about. You will be hearing from me soon I hope.
Mary Anne
Monday, 4 January 2010
Mary Anne (Christmas Candy)
Caleb,
WOW (eyes wide open) this was some story and I thoroughly loved and enjoyed reading it a lot. Looks like Adam got some Christmas Candy at the end and it was Kevin and man good thing it is 27 degrees here with a wind chill of 16 degrees so I could go outside and cool off,
(LOL it was a good thing I had already swallowed my coffee when I read that! It would of gone all over the keyboard!)
loved the striptease show Kevin was putting on for Adam aka doughboy. The party seems like it was a success although three brats were sporting sore backsides with Aled, Jude and Edward and Travis having a semi sore backside because of a playful spanking Callum gave him with the slipper and then they had some Christmas fun at the school and I loved it.
(Travis thoroughly enjoyed himself with that little impromtu role play. Even brats have fantasies it would seem! Trevor would be jealous!)
Don't think Trevor enjoyed the celebration though but Michael will make up for it come tomorrow and I know that Trevor can't wait.
(He's all set for his pressie that's for sure. It's a good thing Michael came along when he did though, he really does seem to understand the demon prince.)
Boohoo now I have finished reading all three of the new stories that were posted now I have to sit back and wait patiently for more to be posted very soon I hope.
(We have one done with a darker side to it. You will be shocked and awed. Hopefully, lol)
In the meantime I will go back and reread all the stories that were posted if I get to antsy waiting for more and knowing me when I get caught up with all my e-mails I will do that very thing I bet.
(You go girl! If you feel the urge to comment on something you didn't catch before feel free to mail me with it. I may have to read the story in question but hey, it breaks up my day too!)
((Thank you so much for reading Mary Anne and for the lovely things that you always say. If there is any sort of story you would like or a plot you have been day dreaming about let me know and we can see if it fits with any of our guys. Happy New Year!)
Mary Anne
WOW (eyes wide open) this was some story and I thoroughly loved and enjoyed reading it a lot. Looks like Adam got some Christmas Candy at the end and it was Kevin and man good thing it is 27 degrees here with a wind chill of 16 degrees so I could go outside and cool off,
(LOL it was a good thing I had already swallowed my coffee when I read that! It would of gone all over the keyboard!)
loved the striptease show Kevin was putting on for Adam aka doughboy. The party seems like it was a success although three brats were sporting sore backsides with Aled, Jude and Edward and Travis having a semi sore backside because of a playful spanking Callum gave him with the slipper and then they had some Christmas fun at the school and I loved it.
(Travis thoroughly enjoyed himself with that little impromtu role play. Even brats have fantasies it would seem! Trevor would be jealous!)
Don't think Trevor enjoyed the celebration though but Michael will make up for it come tomorrow and I know that Trevor can't wait.
(He's all set for his pressie that's for sure. It's a good thing Michael came along when he did though, he really does seem to understand the demon prince.)
Boohoo now I have finished reading all three of the new stories that were posted now I have to sit back and wait patiently for more to be posted very soon I hope.
(We have one done with a darker side to it. You will be shocked and awed. Hopefully, lol)
In the meantime I will go back and reread all the stories that were posted if I get to antsy waiting for more and knowing me when I get caught up with all my e-mails I will do that very thing I bet.
(You go girl! If you feel the urge to comment on something you didn't catch before feel free to mail me with it. I may have to read the story in question but hey, it breaks up my day too!)
((Thank you so much for reading Mary Anne and for the lovely things that you always say. If there is any sort of story you would like or a plot you have been day dreaming about let me know and we can see if it fits with any of our guys. Happy New Year!)
Mary Anne
Mary Anne (Two Men And A Boat)
Hi Caleb,
I just have got through reading this amazing story as well and let me tell you I enjoyed it with a passion. Well now who knew Gnomes would make good sailors, looks like Ethan and Adam's made fine sailors and loved their ride and piloting of Jeff's boat while technically floating on Jack's pond and I loved it.
(Yes, I do believe Henry was getting a little bored in the back garden and just itching for an adventure. Little did he know he would be on a boat though!)
I do believe both Aled and Edward enjoyed their liberation of the boat and gnomes but don't think Jeff, Jack, Charlie or Declan were very happy with the partners in crime.
(Yes, darn Edward and his grown up genes, drat, drat, drat! But he came up with a gret alternative plan!)
I thought for sure at first Jack and Ethan would be facing Jeff especially when Caroline called him but for once they were innocent except for maybe Ethan because he knew about the boat and sounds like Chris was in a little trouble with Jack for his part in getting Jack out on a buttie run for Aled and Edward, I loved his spanking one hard swat and it was over.
(I bet jack thought he was in trouble too. I'mvery glad that Caroline believes her eldest son.
I'm not sure Ethan and innocent should be used in the same sentence on things like this. Of course, he could just blame Eddie for it all couldn't he?
Jack is nothing if not a fair man in all things. Now what do you suppose he did to Ethan later on?)
I guess Aled and Edward were lucky that Jeff let Charlie and Declan deal with the mischief of Aled and Edward, however though not too sure how the talk Jeff will be having with Ethan will turn out.
I doubt that Jeff would of spanked Edward but you never know for sure with him. Jack talking to his dad helped though I'm sure. After all Charlie is just getting into the "Ahem" swingof things. Okay so a very bad pun but I couldn't help it.
I'm sure Ethan can take whatever Papa Smurf dishes out. He's a big boy now. Okay, so I'm not sure but Jack will pick up the pieces.)
I see Adam wasn't mad at all about his gnomes being taking for their voyage in Jeff's boat and now he has then back in the cafe and looking out the window, wonder what Caleb will think when he sees the little guys staring back at him from the window.
I'll bet he wonders where they were, what they had been up to and why is there a large pictureof gnomes in the cafe anyway? LOL)
I loved the picture of Papa Smurf at the end fits Jeff perfectly. Can't wait to read the Christmas story next to see what will be happening with that story.
And do you know there really aren't that many of the smurfs? I was dumbfounded and then quite pleased. I don't like the Smurfs all that much, shh don't tell anyone that!)
Mary Anne
I just have got through reading this amazing story as well and let me tell you I enjoyed it with a passion. Well now who knew Gnomes would make good sailors, looks like Ethan and Adam's made fine sailors and loved their ride and piloting of Jeff's boat while technically floating on Jack's pond and I loved it.
(Yes, I do believe Henry was getting a little bored in the back garden and just itching for an adventure. Little did he know he would be on a boat though!)
I do believe both Aled and Edward enjoyed their liberation of the boat and gnomes but don't think Jeff, Jack, Charlie or Declan were very happy with the partners in crime.
(Yes, darn Edward and his grown up genes, drat, drat, drat! But he came up with a gret alternative plan!)
I thought for sure at first Jack and Ethan would be facing Jeff especially when Caroline called him but for once they were innocent except for maybe Ethan because he knew about the boat and sounds like Chris was in a little trouble with Jack for his part in getting Jack out on a buttie run for Aled and Edward, I loved his spanking one hard swat and it was over.
(I bet jack thought he was in trouble too. I'mvery glad that Caroline believes her eldest son.
I'm not sure Ethan and innocent should be used in the same sentence on things like this. Of course, he could just blame Eddie for it all couldn't he?
Jack is nothing if not a fair man in all things. Now what do you suppose he did to Ethan later on?)
I guess Aled and Edward were lucky that Jeff let Charlie and Declan deal with the mischief of Aled and Edward, however though not too sure how the talk Jeff will be having with Ethan will turn out.
I doubt that Jeff would of spanked Edward but you never know for sure with him. Jack talking to his dad helped though I'm sure. After all Charlie is just getting into the "Ahem" swingof things. Okay so a very bad pun but I couldn't help it.
I'm sure Ethan can take whatever Papa Smurf dishes out. He's a big boy now. Okay, so I'm not sure but Jack will pick up the pieces.)
I see Adam wasn't mad at all about his gnomes being taking for their voyage in Jeff's boat and now he has then back in the cafe and looking out the window, wonder what Caleb will think when he sees the little guys staring back at him from the window.
I'll bet he wonders where they were, what they had been up to and why is there a large pictureof gnomes in the cafe anyway? LOL)
I loved the picture of Papa Smurf at the end fits Jeff perfectly. Can't wait to read the Christmas story next to see what will be happening with that story.
And do you know there really aren't that many of the smurfs? I was dumbfounded and then quite pleased. I don't like the Smurfs all that much, shh don't tell anyone that!)
Mary Anne
Mary Anne (Trading Places))
Hi Caleb,
Thank you so much for getting back to me about the new stories and thank you for sending them to me in my mail. I thought this was one of the new ones but I was thrown for a loop when the date was November 26th and not a December date.
Yeah that is a bit strange considering I posted it and don't know what happened, lol!
Anyway I wanted to let you know that I thoroughly loved and enjoyed reading this wonderful story with a complete passion. I see three of the couples decided to switch roles with each other for a week but the role reversal didn't work out at all I see.
(Sadly no it did not. What were they thinking anyway!!!)
Jack and Chris were the first couple to give in followed by Ethan and Andy and last but not least Callum and Travis and I loved reading about the new roles. I though myself it wouldn't work out especially with all the hectic schedules they all have but it was worth a try.
As Adam is so fondof telling me all the time, be careful what you wish for.)
I see Caleb found himself in some trouble not only with his father but Adam as well, I can only imagine how that came out in the end for Caleb.
(You won't have to try and imagine this one. It all becomes clear later on in another time and place.)
When I get around to reading the next new story up on Charlie and Aled's blog I will give feedback for that one as well and I am also looking forward to reading the Christmas one as well although it will be late and for that I will apologize in advance. Thank you for taking the time to send this story and the Christmas one directly to my via my e-mail I really appreciate it a lot.
No worries Mary Anne, we are always willing to wait for someone to read. I just hope they live up to your expectations.
Your more than welcome. I don't mind doing that if it makes life a bit easier. Hopefully I have convinced Callum and Travis to behave themselves now.)
I got the pictures that were embedded in this story but for some reason the picture of Callum was a red x but Travis came out just fine. I am getting ready to read the other new one that was posted Two men and a boat and will give feedback when I get through reading that one as well.
(Sometimes that happens. I think it was because Callum's was the first one at the side bar and could of been not all there. Like he is? LOL)
Thanks for reading and I do hope that you enjoy the others as well.
Mary Anne
Thank you so much for getting back to me about the new stories and thank you for sending them to me in my mail. I thought this was one of the new ones but I was thrown for a loop when the date was November 26th and not a December date.
Yeah that is a bit strange considering I posted it and don't know what happened, lol!
Anyway I wanted to let you know that I thoroughly loved and enjoyed reading this wonderful story with a complete passion. I see three of the couples decided to switch roles with each other for a week but the role reversal didn't work out at all I see.
(Sadly no it did not. What were they thinking anyway!!!)
Jack and Chris were the first couple to give in followed by Ethan and Andy and last but not least Callum and Travis and I loved reading about the new roles. I though myself it wouldn't work out especially with all the hectic schedules they all have but it was worth a try.
As Adam is so fondof telling me all the time, be careful what you wish for.)
I see Caleb found himself in some trouble not only with his father but Adam as well, I can only imagine how that came out in the end for Caleb.
(You won't have to try and imagine this one. It all becomes clear later on in another time and place.)
When I get around to reading the next new story up on Charlie and Aled's blog I will give feedback for that one as well and I am also looking forward to reading the Christmas one as well although it will be late and for that I will apologize in advance. Thank you for taking the time to send this story and the Christmas one directly to my via my e-mail I really appreciate it a lot.
No worries Mary Anne, we are always willing to wait for someone to read. I just hope they live up to your expectations.
Your more than welcome. I don't mind doing that if it makes life a bit easier. Hopefully I have convinced Callum and Travis to behave themselves now.)
I got the pictures that were embedded in this story but for some reason the picture of Callum was a red x but Travis came out just fine. I am getting ready to read the other new one that was posted Two men and a boat and will give feedback when I get through reading that one as well.
(Sometimes that happens. I think it was because Callum's was the first one at the side bar and could of been not all there. Like he is? LOL)
Thanks for reading and I do hope that you enjoy the others as well.
Mary Anne
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