Hi Caleb,
I have just got through reading this another one of your magnificent crossover stories and I loved it after I got through all the tears I was shedding while reading the part about Ethan and Edward being dead literally (my eyes).
(If its any consolation to you we let a friend read this before we published it and she cried knowing that we hadn't really killed them off.)
I was thinking why in the heck did you go and kill off both Ethan and Edward, how dare you!
It didn't register with my brain where the part about Edward thinking that Ethan would tell the others about the new plan and vice versa until I saw the part about both Ethan and Edward alive and well sleeping in a tent while camping in the moors, then it started registering then and my heart came back to me when I saw it was true.
(We were sort of hoping that people would forget that little tidbit as the story progressed, guess it worked!
I have to admit I did toy with the whole idea a bit but I rather enjoy writing Ethan and Adam likes doing Edward, I especially like them together, lol).
Don't think any of the villagers were happy with those two once they found out what the heck happened and where the heck they were and then they were all happy again but some were furious at the time but mellowed out after it registered that both Ethan and Edward were alive and well and not ghosts or angels this time.
(Yeah, I think there were some very upset folk in our village but they did get over it. Don't you wonder just what Jack did though? I have a good imagination but it fails me here.)
Once they were told to line up I was thinking that here it comes the whole village was going to get the pleasure of swatting some rather naughty backsides but looks like the back of the head was the preferred spot this time.
(Maybe the last one had headache pills for them lol!)
I know the whole village is very happy that Ethan and Edward are alive and well and back home in the village especially Declan and Andy.
(Yes they are. One of my favourite parts is where Declan tells Edward he can't "play" with Ethan for a while.)
As soon as I get the time I will read the final story you have out this month so far called You So Did Not and I can't wait. I have got to go out of town tonight and hopefully be back by Sunday to read that last story and give feedback for it when I get through with it.
(No worries there. We will be here waiting. Be safe and be happy.)
Mary Anne
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