Hi Caleb,
I have just now finally got around to reading this fantastic and long awaited story from you and Adam. Thank you for the heads up to the new characters that I would encounter while reading this and I was happy to see that the Nether Kipling Village got four new characters with Paul, Gideon, Dylan and Ian and I loved them a lot, I didn't have any problem with them once I got to know them better.
They grow on a person I think. You will get some background on them all in another story that we are going to begin soon. (since this was months ago I have to say that that story in being written and is already nearly 200 pages)
Sounds like the brats didn't like the newcomers in Khaki at first and tried their best to make sure that no more ex-soldiers would invade the village but unfortunately that plan backfired big time for all involved including Jesse and Emily I see and I loved it.
You know what they say, best laid plans and all. Our boys just can't seem to stay out of trouble no matter what they do.
Now I got a laugh out of Jack, Ethan, Damon, Aled, and Edward when they found out who was moving into the village none other than the RSM himself, especially Jack I didn't think anything scared him, I thought he scared the others and that was a precious sight.
Jack was young when he met the RSM and as he says Paul helped to make him the man he is in some ways. It was precious and hopefully we can explore that in more depth at some point.
Now though that the brat fiasco has been taken care of and Jack and the new ex-soldiers are finally becoming friends albeit very slowly the village will be much more calmer and everyone will start getting along more and the four newcomers will be welcomed into the family with open arms. I guess the brats in the village will not only have to be on the lookout for Jack and Kevin being swat happy but probably down the road in the future Paul and Dylan as well when they get to know them better.
I know Paul won't find it difficult to swat at will, he was the RSM after all but Dylan may stay his hand a bit more. He was just a Captain after all lol!
The talk in the garden between Paul and Chris was memorable and now I think Chris understands Jack and the others more and the reasons they don't want to talk about Sandhurst and what they went through as far as being in the service goes.
Chris has a big curious bone hidden inside him but he lets it come out as it will. His main concern in life is Jack. You've seen the WWJD braclets that came out eons ago? FOr Chris it is what would jack do.
Most definitely looking forward to reading more of your amazing stories very soon or whenever you two have the time to write more, that is if you do that is. By the way thank you for the pictures of the chickens they are adorable, well for chickens anyway. I hope you and Adam are doing well and things are settling down for you two finally.
Mary Anne
The chickens are all laying now and have their own unique personalities. I really enjoy watching them. Adam put a roof on their pen and we call it their conservatory lol!
Wednesday, 24 November 2010
Caleb,
I have gotten around to reading this second wonderful and magnificent story and I thoroughly loved and enjoyed reading it a lot. Well now looks like Nicky had the households of Jack, Chris, Ethan, Andy, Adam, Caleb, Kevin, Alex and Callum and Travis in an uproar with the microbugs fiasco with the gardeners and I loved it.
This came about because Adam took up gardening. Yes he did! I hate it but it keeps him happy and busy and not thinking about other things. Although I may never have sex again after reading about those icky things EUW!
I also loved the revenge err payback that Chris, Andy, Caleb, Alex and Travis got on Nicky with tying him to a pole and tar and feathering him so to speak, but I don't think Damon was too happy with what he saw either and I say one thing Chris and Caleb were two very brave brats to stand up to a top like Damon believe me.
Yes there is just something about Damon that is scary isn't there? Maybe we will learn more about him in other stories and see what that is all about.
I don't think they got away with it though especially with both Chris and Caleb kicking Jack and Adam in the shins, Alex, Andy, and Travis got off a little lighter I think, not sure though. Looks as if Jack didn't like the little cuff Ethan gave him at the cafe and punished him by making his polish the stones on the patio with a toothbrush, soap and water and I loved it.
Jack is devious, just plan and simple sadistic, devious, cunning etc. Nuff said.
Looking forward September when I get to read more of your amazing and fantastic stories. I hope you and Adam have a wonderful time together and a fun-filled vacation. Thank you for asking about my mother I really appreciate it a lot and it means a lot to me.
Not a problem girl, I do keep her in the prayers.
Mary Anne
I have gotten around to reading this second wonderful and magnificent story and I thoroughly loved and enjoyed reading it a lot. Well now looks like Nicky had the households of Jack, Chris, Ethan, Andy, Adam, Caleb, Kevin, Alex and Callum and Travis in an uproar with the microbugs fiasco with the gardeners and I loved it.
This came about because Adam took up gardening. Yes he did! I hate it but it keeps him happy and busy and not thinking about other things. Although I may never have sex again after reading about those icky things EUW!
I also loved the revenge err payback that Chris, Andy, Caleb, Alex and Travis got on Nicky with tying him to a pole and tar and feathering him so to speak, but I don't think Damon was too happy with what he saw either and I say one thing Chris and Caleb were two very brave brats to stand up to a top like Damon believe me.
Yes there is just something about Damon that is scary isn't there? Maybe we will learn more about him in other stories and see what that is all about.
I don't think they got away with it though especially with both Chris and Caleb kicking Jack and Adam in the shins, Alex, Andy, and Travis got off a little lighter I think, not sure though. Looks as if Jack didn't like the little cuff Ethan gave him at the cafe and punished him by making his polish the stones on the patio with a toothbrush, soap and water and I loved it.
Jack is devious, just plan and simple sadistic, devious, cunning etc. Nuff said.
Looking forward September when I get to read more of your amazing and fantastic stories. I hope you and Adam have a wonderful time together and a fun-filled vacation. Thank you for asking about my mother I really appreciate it a lot and it means a lot to me.
Not a problem girl, I do keep her in the prayers.
Mary Anne
Story
Caleb,
I have finally gotten around to reading this fist new story you sent and I wanted to let you know that I thoroughly loved and enjoyed reading it with a passion. I see Ethan was up to his tricks again with the chocolate cake thanks to Trevor and it sounded like when Jen found out she was not a very happy doctor and she let Ethan, Travis, Chloe and Trevor know it as well by contacting Jack and making sure he took care of Ethan and boy did he and I see that over the knee cane is history and decorating Jack's garden for that I know Ethan, Andy, Chris and Trevor are grateful for.
Jack takes his resposibilities seriously and possibly moreso since that "talk" with his dada few stories back.
Jen knows just where to hit so it hurts doesn't she.
As far as Travis, Chloe and Trevor they were keeping Adam's corners company in the cafe and I loved it. Looks like Adam's talk with Callum about his and Travis's relationship has changed them for the better and now Callum gets to be home more and Travis don't have to feel like a lodger anymore. I guess we can safely say the *barn raising* was a success all the way around. Good thing both Callum and Travis know how to cook because is sounds like Stella and Beatrice are going their own way and Stella won't be working for Callum and Travis anymore.
Everyone moves on at some time and even though Stella has been with Callum for years she has always wanted a little bistro of her own. She doesn't want to compete with Adam or Shappa but maybe enhance the dining experience of Nether Kipping?
I do believe Chloe found herself in trouble with Adam and his paddle for that party she and the girls threw and I loved it, don't think Chloe did though.
No, Chloe would not like that one bit I'm afraid.
I see Jack convinced Jen in letting Ethan go to Brazil but not without supervision with Jack, Chris and Andy along for the ride and sounds like Kevin is all for the idea as well.
Yep, and it gives us something to write about later on. OF course that will have to be after a few others are done.
I am surprised that when Chris set the smoke detector off by killing the tea kettle that the alarm didn't go off at the Fire Station bringing Kevin and brigade to Jack's house. I see Trevor couldn't stay out of trouble either with Jack and he showed Trevor just how he felt about disrespecting Pru and her undergarments with that infamous cane, that even sounding nasty and very painful even to me.
Jack is cane happy. We might even find out why later on, you never know. I think Chris, Trevor Ethan and Aled should go on holiday together and maybe take Joseph with them. Jack would have to behave for a little while then lol!
Whenever I get the time to read the next new story you sent I will be sending you more feedback for that one. I am so happy that you are feeling much better now and that things are just perfect with you and Adam. I read about you taking a break from writing maybe until September and I don't blame you one bit. Believe me if I get to missing your stories I will go back and reread the ones I have saved on my computer in my documents and to let you know I am seriously thinking about buying one or more of the books in the near future. Looking forward to reading the next story when I get the time and I hope you and Adam have a good time on vacation.
Mary Anne
New ones are being thought about and hoepfully put to paper soonish. You hold that thought on buying though. I am revising at the beginninbg of the year and we now have the option to discount. I will keep you posted.
I have finally gotten around to reading this fist new story you sent and I wanted to let you know that I thoroughly loved and enjoyed reading it with a passion. I see Ethan was up to his tricks again with the chocolate cake thanks to Trevor and it sounded like when Jen found out she was not a very happy doctor and she let Ethan, Travis, Chloe and Trevor know it as well by contacting Jack and making sure he took care of Ethan and boy did he and I see that over the knee cane is history and decorating Jack's garden for that I know Ethan, Andy, Chris and Trevor are grateful for.
Jack takes his resposibilities seriously and possibly moreso since that "talk" with his dada few stories back.
Jen knows just where to hit so it hurts doesn't she.
As far as Travis, Chloe and Trevor they were keeping Adam's corners company in the cafe and I loved it. Looks like Adam's talk with Callum about his and Travis's relationship has changed them for the better and now Callum gets to be home more and Travis don't have to feel like a lodger anymore. I guess we can safely say the *barn raising* was a success all the way around. Good thing both Callum and Travis know how to cook because is sounds like Stella and Beatrice are going their own way and Stella won't be working for Callum and Travis anymore.
Everyone moves on at some time and even though Stella has been with Callum for years she has always wanted a little bistro of her own. She doesn't want to compete with Adam or Shappa but maybe enhance the dining experience of Nether Kipping?
I do believe Chloe found herself in trouble with Adam and his paddle for that party she and the girls threw and I loved it, don't think Chloe did though.
No, Chloe would not like that one bit I'm afraid.
I see Jack convinced Jen in letting Ethan go to Brazil but not without supervision with Jack, Chris and Andy along for the ride and sounds like Kevin is all for the idea as well.
Yep, and it gives us something to write about later on. OF course that will have to be after a few others are done.
I am surprised that when Chris set the smoke detector off by killing the tea kettle that the alarm didn't go off at the Fire Station bringing Kevin and brigade to Jack's house. I see Trevor couldn't stay out of trouble either with Jack and he showed Trevor just how he felt about disrespecting Pru and her undergarments with that infamous cane, that even sounding nasty and very painful even to me.
Jack is cane happy. We might even find out why later on, you never know. I think Chris, Trevor Ethan and Aled should go on holiday together and maybe take Joseph with them. Jack would have to behave for a little while then lol!
Whenever I get the time to read the next new story you sent I will be sending you more feedback for that one. I am so happy that you are feeling much better now and that things are just perfect with you and Adam. I read about you taking a break from writing maybe until September and I don't blame you one bit. Believe me if I get to missing your stories I will go back and reread the ones I have saved on my computer in my documents and to let you know I am seriously thinking about buying one or more of the books in the near future. Looking forward to reading the next story when I get the time and I hope you and Adam have a good time on vacation.
Mary Anne
New ones are being thought about and hoepfully put to paper soonish. You hold that thought on buying though. I am revising at the beginninbg of the year and we now have the option to discount. I will keep you posted.
Workin For Da Man
Caleb,
Thank you for sending me this most exciting and in some ways hilarious story and I loved it with a complete passion. I am so happy that you sent this story this way because I tries to read the feedback you sent me in reference to the re,re humph one and all I got was a bunch of squiggly lines and boxes in between some of the words I could make out so I ended up deleting the file that I downloaded it with.
It could be our downloads are not compatible,lol!
Anyway on with the story, just wanted to let you know that you made my day err night more pleasurable with this new story and I loved it a lot. You weren't kidding when you said that I would be surprised as to whom both Joseph and Jacob would end up with and boy was I because I knew they were both brats from just reading about them and now here is Devlin with Joseph and Jason with Jacob, twins with twins who would have figured,
We gave that few days thought. I used to think it was so cliche when I would hear real life twins marryin twins but hey, we can be cliche too apparently.
didn't even know Devlin was a Top until I read this but I suspected Jason of being one and what a way to get a brat real fast in Jason and Jacob's case meeting at a get together for doctors and having sex within 10 minutes of meeting eachother now that was fast and I loved it.
Frankly it happens that way a lot in our circle, not the getting together bit but the sex. I hate to say it but in the gay community it stll is a lot of sex in corners type thing. Fortunately, Jason, (who by the way gets a name change later on as we decided we weren't that keen on either Devlin or Jason for names lol) is an honourable man and made an honest one of Jacob.
Poor Jason though he was so confused when he went to meet Devlin's partner for the first time and thinking that Jacob was two timing Devlin, I don't think he was very happy about that
No he certainly was not a happy doctor at that time was he? It all worked out though in the end.
and poor Joseph taking the heat so to speak for Jacob's behavior from Devlin and Joseph not even trying to correct him at that time as it was when Jason confronted Jacob in the Cafe about the two timing and not even trying to deny that either until it got to the point where Jacob was upset and getting louder and bring Adam out and his glare put Jason in his place and Jacob finally telling Jason about his twin brother Joseph and both Devlin and Jason finally getting to meet Joseph and Jacob at the same time so then they had no reason not to believe the boys then.
LOL I think I followed that. Yes, Joseph did take a lot of heat for his brother I will admit but I'm pretty sure he was more pissed at Jacob when he found out than Devlin (who gets a name change too).
I think that Dev and Jay will have their hands full with Joey and Jake don't you?
The poker party was a trip even in my book from Charlie smacking Ethan to Jen and Melanie showing up and having Ethan call the rest of the lesbians to invite them to Jack's poker party to Melanie trying to get Chris in trouble with Jack, to Jude running out of the room yelling for Tristan telling him that Caleb was killing Chloe and the one that takes the cake was Caleb throwing up on Chloe and Chloe throwing up on Caleb. Hmm I wonder what the shriek that was heard throughout Jack's house was about and let's hope that the candles that Chris and Emily lit won't catch anything on fire although there is some firefighters in the house with Kevin and Aled but I don't think it would help unless they had they firetruck there.
Okay one at a time here, I haven't read this again so I'm winging it! I wasn't too sure who was more upset, Charlie or Ethan over that. I think maybe Charlie.
My poor confused Top gets himself in such predicaments,although he would move mountains for Jack, I'm sure.
Melanie is going to be trouble I can see it now. God help us if her and Chloe become friends!
I'm not sure that even fire is brave enough to risk pissing Kevin off when he is relaxing.
I just loved the stories that the Tops were telling about what happened with the brats but the one that stood out was Melanie trying to make Tacos at 3 in the morning and getting distracted by a whimpering dog and setting the house on fire and Jen waking up to Kevin standing over her and her out on the lawn in here nightgown, good thing she don't sleep in her birthday suit now that would have not only the neighbors talking but the firefighters as well.
IF anyone could pull off the whole "I'm in my birthday suit and it does not bother me" thing it would be Jen I think. She doesn't seem to ruffle easily. Of course it could be the whole specialist thing and she even has Jack on her team, now that's a feat.
Most definitely looking forward to reading more of your amazing stories very soon, yea I know it will probably be later on this month or even next month but you can't blame a girl for trying though. I still have these two that you sent to be to reread if I get bored and want to read them again, at least that will keep me occupied until you send more. Thank you so much for sending me the stories you know exactly how to make my day or night much more better.
Mary Anne
We're slow now I admit but we will get them to you darlin.
Thank you for sending me this most exciting and in some ways hilarious story and I loved it with a complete passion. I am so happy that you sent this story this way because I tries to read the feedback you sent me in reference to the re,re humph one and all I got was a bunch of squiggly lines and boxes in between some of the words I could make out so I ended up deleting the file that I downloaded it with.
It could be our downloads are not compatible,lol!
Anyway on with the story, just wanted to let you know that you made my day err night more pleasurable with this new story and I loved it a lot. You weren't kidding when you said that I would be surprised as to whom both Joseph and Jacob would end up with and boy was I because I knew they were both brats from just reading about them and now here is Devlin with Joseph and Jason with Jacob, twins with twins who would have figured,
We gave that few days thought. I used to think it was so cliche when I would hear real life twins marryin twins but hey, we can be cliche too apparently.
didn't even know Devlin was a Top until I read this but I suspected Jason of being one and what a way to get a brat real fast in Jason and Jacob's case meeting at a get together for doctors and having sex within 10 minutes of meeting eachother now that was fast and I loved it.
Frankly it happens that way a lot in our circle, not the getting together bit but the sex. I hate to say it but in the gay community it stll is a lot of sex in corners type thing. Fortunately, Jason, (who by the way gets a name change later on as we decided we weren't that keen on either Devlin or Jason for names lol) is an honourable man and made an honest one of Jacob.
Poor Jason though he was so confused when he went to meet Devlin's partner for the first time and thinking that Jacob was two timing Devlin, I don't think he was very happy about that
No he certainly was not a happy doctor at that time was he? It all worked out though in the end.
and poor Joseph taking the heat so to speak for Jacob's behavior from Devlin and Joseph not even trying to correct him at that time as it was when Jason confronted Jacob in the Cafe about the two timing and not even trying to deny that either until it got to the point where Jacob was upset and getting louder and bring Adam out and his glare put Jason in his place and Jacob finally telling Jason about his twin brother Joseph and both Devlin and Jason finally getting to meet Joseph and Jacob at the same time so then they had no reason not to believe the boys then.
LOL I think I followed that. Yes, Joseph did take a lot of heat for his brother I will admit but I'm pretty sure he was more pissed at Jacob when he found out than Devlin (who gets a name change too).
I think that Dev and Jay will have their hands full with Joey and Jake don't you?
The poker party was a trip even in my book from Charlie smacking Ethan to Jen and Melanie showing up and having Ethan call the rest of the lesbians to invite them to Jack's poker party to Melanie trying to get Chris in trouble with Jack, to Jude running out of the room yelling for Tristan telling him that Caleb was killing Chloe and the one that takes the cake was Caleb throwing up on Chloe and Chloe throwing up on Caleb. Hmm I wonder what the shriek that was heard throughout Jack's house was about and let's hope that the candles that Chris and Emily lit won't catch anything on fire although there is some firefighters in the house with Kevin and Aled but I don't think it would help unless they had they firetruck there.
Okay one at a time here, I haven't read this again so I'm winging it! I wasn't too sure who was more upset, Charlie or Ethan over that. I think maybe Charlie.
My poor confused Top gets himself in such predicaments,although he would move mountains for Jack, I'm sure.
Melanie is going to be trouble I can see it now. God help us if her and Chloe become friends!
I'm not sure that even fire is brave enough to risk pissing Kevin off when he is relaxing.
I just loved the stories that the Tops were telling about what happened with the brats but the one that stood out was Melanie trying to make Tacos at 3 in the morning and getting distracted by a whimpering dog and setting the house on fire and Jen waking up to Kevin standing over her and her out on the lawn in here nightgown, good thing she don't sleep in her birthday suit now that would have not only the neighbors talking but the firefighters as well.
IF anyone could pull off the whole "I'm in my birthday suit and it does not bother me" thing it would be Jen I think. She doesn't seem to ruffle easily. Of course it could be the whole specialist thing and she even has Jack on her team, now that's a feat.
Most definitely looking forward to reading more of your amazing stories very soon, yea I know it will probably be later on this month or even next month but you can't blame a girl for trying though. I still have these two that you sent to be to reread if I get bored and want to read them again, at least that will keep me occupied until you send more. Thank you so much for sending me the stories you know exactly how to make my day or night much more better.
Mary Anne
We're slow now I admit but we will get them to you darlin.
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