Mary Anne (Brat Swap)

Hi Caleb,
I just wanted to thank you for another fantabulous crossover story, I took my time and read it day by day until I finally read the last of it last night, I guess you can say I was savoring it because I don't know when I will be seeing more fantastic stories from you and I wanted to stretch that last one out.

(You stretch as long as you want girlfriend. We don't mind, lol.


I took your advice and kept notes to keep up with the action and I loved it. The idea of swapping brats was incredible and gave the brats a sense of what it would be like living with other tops instead of their own and what they would do if trouble sprung up and believe me there was trouble a plenty just like I like it, to keep the tops on their toes and boy did they.

(We thought it would help with something this long. I know when I read a really long story I do that just so I don't forget what I want to comment on.

Yes, we are trying out new things with our little village; not just always the same stuff that everyone writes about).


The idea to have a poker game at the end of the two week swap for the tops to get their original brats back and get rid of the temp tops where I bet if the brats hadn't decided to race cars and get caught by none other than Jack and Aled's dad Jeff there would have been hot make up and missed sex all the way around instead of the Tops have to roast backsides with all too handy paddles (GRINS), not this time though except for maybe a few, I know I wouldn't want anything near by toasted butt for a while at least.

(I don't know who was looking forward to it more, the Tops or the brats but they did go out with a bang.LOL.
As for the hot sex I know at least two of the Tops would even if their partner was paddled within an inch of his life. Trevor actually looks forward to it and Jack doesn;t let it stop him).

I see Chloe couldn't resist the race either and wound up in trouble right along with Emily, fortunately they managed to lose their escort Jeff and probably hightailed it back to their homes and hiding under the beds or closets to keep anyone from finding them, especially it Jeff managed to track down Molly and Pru.

(LOL, yep the girls had to be there too! I'msure that Jeff went and found Molly and Pru and there were tears before bedtime in the lesbian quarter too).

I totally loved and enjoyed this whole October's stories and I can't wait to read more of your new stories very soon I hope or whenever you get the time to write more. I hope everything is OK with both you and Adam and I will be waiting patiently until more is posted I hope.

(November 16)

Mary Anne

Mary Anne; Wednesday Is

Hi Caleb,
Just wanted to let you know that I have just got through reading this magnificent crossover story and it was hilarious in some ways and not in others.

(We try to inject a little humour in all of our stories as we feel that is the way real life is. Nothing is ever all serious or all fun and games. So we must have managed to strike that balance for you. Go US! LOL!)

Well who would have known that the very night the tops let the brats top for once all of the tops minus Damon and Shappa wind up being guests in the Bristol hospital for various medical reasons,

(Yes that is an unfortunate turn of events as Jack was quick to point out that he sustained his injury in the proper manner. LOL)


along with the tops there were two unfortunate brats to add to the equation with Nicky and Tom and while the tops were laid up the other brats had to be divided up and babysat by Damon and Shappa and I love it.

(Good! I just hope that Andy didn't put Shappa in any cupboard whilst he was there!)


I wonder how long the tops will be guests of the hospital and if the ever find a way to remove the nice blue bullet from Ethan.

(LOL! Ethan was groggy because they had operated on him to remove it. Leaving something like that in there could not be a good thing! Mostly it would be an over night thing. None of them were seriously damaged and were there only as a precaution.)


I wonder how much trouble the brats will give the two substitute tops. Looking forward to reading the other crossover story you have out and when I get through with it you will most definitely hearing from me again, trust me

(I trust you Darling. I do hope you enjoy it).

Mary Anne

Mary Annes (Damon's Poker Party)

Hi Caleb,
I have just got around to reading the new Damon and Nick story and I wanted to let you know that I enjoyed reading it a lot.

(Thanks!)

At first with all the brats trying to kick the tops out of the house as fast as possible I thought they all had some type of mischief planned but all I saw was Chris and Trevor with Chris riding his skateboard out of the front door and down the steps and I loved it although it is a dangerous thing to do because Chris may have gotten hurt but luckily he didn't

(No, no mischief this time. Chris and Trevor were just enjoying a balmy evening between DVD's is all. They're just the more boisterous of the group and play hard.)


and now the truth is out about Jack being Chris's babysitter and I don't think that Chris can see that at anytime, oh well he will eventually get over it and probably the rest of the Jade Heights residents as well in the very far future maybe.

(I'm sure Chris will but the Tops will probably rib Jack for a while. They don't often get to do that, he's a very composed man. LOL at the Jade Heights though, we have never visited Canada with our boys. Nether Kipping is where they live. I thought it was kinda funny though, as I had just chatted with Jodie the other day!)


I see they finally got about to talking about the brats mischief at the game until jack jumped up and left and I reckon the game ended and they all went home, oh well maybe next time.

(Yes, unfortunately there was a fire and Kevin had to leave. It put a damper on the game and Jack did want to talk to Chris.)

Getting ready to read the Crossover Story Wednesday is hump day and I can't wait, sounds very interesting to say the least.

(Don't have any hot drinks around. Hoshi said she laughed till she fell off her chair and had to get back on to laugh some more. I hope you like it as well!)

Oh before I forget again I wanted to let you know that I enjoyed the new artwork on the Damon and Nick blog
(Thanks!)

and I most definitely wanted to thank you for redoing the feedback blog as well, my favorite being from North Carolina and all the Dogwood tree our national tree, the tree and color scheme is simply amazing and pleasant on the eyes.

(I thought is was pretty too and you always say such nice things that you deserved a pretty blog.)

When I get through reading the crossover stories you will be hearing from me again I assure you.

(LOL I hope so. I love reading what you have to say.)

Mary Anne

Mary Anne Black and White

Caleb,
Thank you for letting me know about the new story and where it was found, I enjoyed reading this new story and man you had me on pins and needles when I read about Jonathan's tractor flipping over on him, matter of fact I was literally in tears when I saw that

(Aww, but that is what we were going for so I'm pleased. Not you literally of course but the feeling)


and thank goodness Danyiel and Alric heard Jonathan's prayers and got Kevin, Aled and his crew out there in good time to rescue him, I really hope and pray that he will be ok and there will be no permanent damage to him.

(Nope lol. Jonathan has to be fit for the next story and it is a fun one for us but time consuming as it involves them all.

I see both Daniel and Trevor has got their wings now and I love the idea.

(It was about time and should prove interesting to see who learns to use them first.)

The conversation going on between Jack, Ethan Kevin and Quinton (Chris's brother) was priceless and Chloe telling Adam that Kevin was at again and Adam telling Kevin to behave with Chloe going on strike was priceless.

(I'm almost positive that Quentin was enjoying himself to the maximum too. Kevin is a law unto himself and he and Adam seem to have hit it off quite well)

You have made my Saturday Evening more enjoyable now that I have read the new story you have written and posted.

(Thanl you for that dear lady and you make ours with the feedback that you always give)

Now I know I will have to wait until around October 16th to read more I will try my best to be patient and if I start missing your stories too bad I can always go back and reread the ones already posted and love them even more. Take Care and Good Luck with everything!

(We is workin hard at it too. I accidently deleted one that I thought Adam had already saved ont eh memory stick, but he hadn't so we had to rewrite it. I always hate doing that! We should have another three ready to go on time too which is amazing given that we have had so much other stuff going on as well.

Thank you so much Mary Anne. You always seem to take a lot of time with your comments and we do so apprecite them.)





Mary Anne