Friday, 10 July 2009

Mary Anne (pts 11-13)

Hi Caleb,

I wanted to let you know that I am not at home at the moment and don't know when I will be back home because of me staying at my sisters to help her with my brother-in-law and of course babysitting my niece.

Yes, I remember you saying that earlier and understand totally.

My brother-in-law had his right knee operated on with the knee replacement surgery on Tuesday this week and they are saying that he is doing just fine and may be able to come home either today or tomorrow not sure yet.

I'm very glad to here that his surgery went well and that he will be home soon. Although they tell me men make the worst patients, what with the whining and moaning lol!

Just wanted to let everyone know of my situation as of now and that I do have access to her computer but just don't have the time during the week to read because of the babysitting, I was lucky today that the baby's mom was off of work today and is keeping her for today, so I have some time to read and review as much as possible.

Yes, babies can be such a handful I know. But they can be great fun too.

Now on to the feedback to the story, I have just now got aroung to reading these delightful and fantastic three more parts to this story and let me tell you that I am loving it a lot. Well now looks like Ethan is almost back to his top form with the help of Kevin, Jack and Callum and I love it.

He's working at it and that's what counts. A person can only take so much "help" before they have to fight back lol.

Hmm sounds like Andy has found himself in trouble with not only Ethan but Kevin as well for running away like he did, I guess he should have took Caleb's advice about that situation to heart and no did it and he wouldn't have two or three tops breathing down his necr right about now.

Andy did listen, he needs to know that Ethan will spank him and be in control of things again. Brats can't function well with a Top out of control like that. We tend to get very insecure.
Let's hope that Kevin thinks whatever punishment Ethan gives Andy is enough or there could be trouble in tinsel town.

Thank goodness Jack wasn't too upset with Chris and Trevor for going out to help find Andy although Callum did ask them and so Jack really didn't have a reason to get mad this time.

Jack may not be the most patient of people or the most understanding but he gets common sense. It was only that that probably kept the brats safe.

I wonder if Ethan will find Andy and what will happen next. Looking forward to reading the next part or parts to find out.

I'm sure he will at some point, and oh my what will happen then? LOL!

Mary Anne

Thursday, 9 July 2009

Weekend Warriors (Nate)

Cool story. But the brats shoudlve spanked the Tops... lol

I enjoyed it.

And I heard a variation of that "hanged for a sheep as a lamb".. actually read it, in Harry Potter ... but that version was "hanged for a chicken as an egg." Either way, means the same thing...

And again, cool story ...

- Nate -


Ta mate, it was one of the ones I enjoyed doing most.

Yes it does mean the same thing and there are many variations of it too.

Caleb

Wednesday, 8 July 2009

Poker Party (Jacks) Bonfire (Nate)

Ah yes, Ethan again. He learns a few things as he goes along.

Andy has something to say on that in another storym lol

Caleb


it's cool..buth Ethan needs to chill out .. lol ... Andy did bad, but I still think he overreacted ... .. but it was a cool story...

~Nate~

Tuesday, 7 July 2009

Grwo Some Funk (Nate)

Cool story.... thought I think Chris shouldve gotten the cane from the outset.... I felt that his dealing was worse than Andy's doing ... but then I generally feel that drinking is far worse than pot smoking anyway ... but that's just my opinion .. and I do think the two who refused the cane shouldnt have gotten the cane..spanked, yes..cane no...cane should be a very last resort..not a first...brush or paddle for refusing shouldve been enough... but again, my opinion ...

- Nate -





Thanks!!!


First point) The whole story hadn't come out for Jack at that point in time and yes, drug dealing is probably worse than drug taking. Jack also did not have a cane if you recall. Once he made the decision to use one he had to ring his mate for help.

I agree with you on Chris's dealing being far worse than Andy popping a few pills to stay awake but at the time again neither Top had the whole story. Later on this comes back to haunt Ethan so remember it lol.



Personally I find both things henious if not done with intelligence and at home, lol and can you do either with intelligence?



Second point) Tom and Caleb refused to take the canes they were not refusing to be caned. Adam had just bought his and had never used it. Shappa has. As for a real spanking for this neither was, the Tops were just making a point with what they had in hand more than anything.

A few strokes over jeans or even bare asses with a cane is not as harsh as a spanking with a paddle or even a hairbrush. It will sting yes, but is gone nearly as quick. Adam and Shappa just wanted them to obey not punish them.



My Adam uses a cane and a riding crop. A hairbrush, wooden spoons, and two types of paddles along with two types of bath brushes. I can deal with all of them but the bath brushes. Don't ask me why but they really really hurt, far worse than a can or riding crop even.



The next time you get a spanking, just a spanking though, nothing over the top like you see in the silly pics of people ask for each implement to be used a few times and you'll see what I mean.

Saturday, 4 July 2009

Mary Anne (pt 19)

Hi Caleb,
Well I have finally finished the last part of this story so far and I have truly loved reading it with a complete passion.

(And you are passionate in your feed back as well which we love!)

You have done an amazing job with this story so far and I can't wait to read more of it if there is more that is.

(I'd say we are about half done now so you will have plenty more to read)

Once again I see Caleb and Andy are talking at the Vet's office and I say it again that is what Andy needs a friend, a fellow brat and a man of the cloth to talk to about his feelings and all to help him through these what are going to be trying times for awhile I am afraid.

(We discussed who would be best to talk to Andy at the point where he would be and Caleb was really the only choice. He is quite sympathetic to others and willing to let them talk and talk even if they keep saying the same thing, which is what most people do in this sort of situation.

Poor Andy though, your heart does have to go out to him in all of this. He really is an innocent bystander taught up in his Tops problems right now. The line that broke my heart was when he said to Jack, "it is me going right?" I can only imagine the pain that would cause him even though Jack tried to lessen the blow.)

Looking forward to reading more of Ethan and Andy or any of the other couples or the crossover of the residents of Nether Kipping very soon hopefully.

Mary Anne

Mary Anne (pt 9)

Caleb,
Another astounding part this was and I loved it.

(We have for the most part enjoyed writing this. I'm still trying to think of an end that brings it back around to Andy and Ethan but secretly am hoping Adam comes up with one.)

Well now I see Kevin knows somewhat where to start with Ethan and enlisting Jack's help with the good top, bad top routine and that I love and can't wait to read how that will turn out.

(Yes Kevin may have a few more patience than Jack after all lol)

Looks like Jack is going to have to keep on top (pardon the pun) of Ethan and show him what it takes to be a good top and in control of all situations, sounds like it is going to be a very interesting time to say the least and I can't wait.

(Jack is the undisputed King in his own mind, err, right, but in this case yes he is the best man for the job as he and Ethan have a lot of history.)

Mary Anne

Mary Anne (pt8)

Hi Caleb,
I have now read part 8 of this ongoing story and I wanted to let you know that I am enjoying this story a lot. Yep you caught me I am pacing myself to reading one part at a time as I would have to do if I didn't have to go out of town and let me tell you it is the hardest thing I have to do by not going ahead and reading the whole thing that has been posted and running out of more parts to read by pacing myself and reading a part a day as it would have been posted.

(Did you take a breath there at all? LOL!

I guess you can say that I am saving the parts of the story as a treat so I will have my daily visit with Ethan and Andy to look forward to each and every day until it is all posted, then I would have to wait to read more of your fantabulous stories on the individual blogs or crossover when they are written and posted.

(There are still at least 10-15 more parts to this saga so you don't need to fret just yet and then we have several more already planned out.)

I see Caleb is telling Alex about the problems with Ethan and Andy's relationship, well what he can tell that is and I know Alex will help anyway he can, whether it is helping with Andy of braving the lions den with Ethan.

(Caleb needed input from someone and he knew it wouldn't help him to go to any of the Tops. Like he said, 21 and a brat,too bad. So in this case he went to the next best thing which was the library, lol!
Alex may not be able to help in any other way than to listen but everyone needs someone who can and is willing to do that for them. He was a great choice!)


I say Jack, Callum, Kevin and Adam are the best Tops to help fix the broken Ethan and glue him back together again. Now that was funny that Caleb was looking for a book in the library on fixing broken tops and Alex thought it was Adam and not Ethan. I see Milly knows about the discipline relationship between Adam and Caleb, well semi knows that is but not too sure about Liam.

(I think so too, they all have the qualities that it will take to put the man on the right track anyway even if it is only supplying the bacon butties Nether Kipping can't seem to do without.

Caleb is young and still quite innocent so for him it would make sense to go to the library for a book. After all shouldn't someone have written one by now?

Does she or doesn't she? It has been said she does, but that means nothing. She could be thinking vanilla and that Adam took him upstairs to have a "little talk" as all couples do on occassion. Hmmm?

Liam on the other hand is a blinded horse. We don't know what he knows and doesn't know. Maybe someday we will.)


Looking forward to reading part nine to see what happens next and once again I am waiting to get all of my July 3rd mail read and then jump in and read part 9 of this story after July 3rd's mail has been read.

Mary Anne

Mary Anne (pt 7)

Hi Caleb,
Me again with more feedback, I know you are going to get tired of me commenting but I can't help it, I love your and Adam's writing so much.

(Not in this life time. You make our mornings!)

Makes me think that I am actually in the scene itself when I read your stories no matter which couple it may be about or Crossover.

(Do you realise this is the highest compliment a reader can give to a writer? I am humbled by it and very happy that you feel this way!)

Well now looks like Kevin has a strong dislike for Ethan's parents and now that he has talked to Andy he knows where to start as far as fixing a broken Ethan once and for all.

(I'm waiting for Jack to have it out with Ethan's parents since "his boy" can't with the whole Catholic upbringing and all. Yes I know some kids can even with it but Ethan is not one of those, sadly.

Kevin hopes he knows where to start, too bad he and Caleb don;t compare notes.)

I have to agree with Kevin here talk to Ethan again and then turn him over to Jack as a temporary top to Ethan which I know Ethan is not a brat but a top himself but right now he needs the brat attention that any brat would need in this circumstance I do believe to get him back on track of being a top and taking control of Andy once again .

(You like the good Top/ bad Top game do you? Yes I think between the two of them they can wear him down.

I'm surprised to see it voiced that Ethan needs the attention one would normally give to a brat at this time but that is spot on. Thank you! He meant it when he said he was being a prig and self centered at the moment and he meant it in a good way. He can't do for Andy if he can't do for himself. I suppose you could say that was his cry for help Ethan style.)

Thank goodness Kevin was there for Andy when Andy needed a cuddle and from the sounds of it I think Andy better be on his best behavior around Kevin and having no thoughts of locking Liam, Milly, Kevin or any other tops in a cupboard on he will be one very sorry brat Ethan or not I do believe.

(LOL! No Kevin is nothing like Damon who is rather easy going until it's time to be tough. kevin spanks first and asks later.)

Mary Anne

Mary Anne (pt 6)

Caleb,
Well I got around to reading part six of this fantastic story and I am loving it with a passion.

(LOL I'm surprised you didn't whip through all the parts up there, you must be saving them as a treat. Go You!)

Hmm sounds like Ethan is a hard egg to crack even for Kevin but sounds like Kevin is trying his best to help Ethan through his upside life and I can't wait to see what Kevin and Ethan's parents have to say about this.

(Like Jack said to Ethan, 'cocky aren't cha.' I don'tknow ifhe realises he is being or not at this point and loving Ethan for all of his flaws I will go with doesn't.)

I have to agree taking on Ethan and Andy is a tiring job for all but we all know eventually things will work out for the best but will just take longer to do.

(Things don't always go the way of happily ever after in our stories. We have a policy to always write "real" but in this case let's hope thatyou are right becaus if you take a good look at the picture on the home page these two are made for one another.)

I reckon it is Callum's turn to Ethan sit for a night to keep him safe and Travis will be under Jack's roof and rules for the night, sounds like it is going to be an interesting night.

(Callum for all of his eccentricities is a good choice. He is unflappable, a constant in any situation that he finds himself. He will be good for Ethan who, being ex army and after living under Jack law for so many years when young, will listen to him.

Travis on the other hand will now have Trevor and Chris to get into trouble with, lol)

Mary Anne

Thursday, 2 July 2009

Mary Anne (pt 5)

Hi Caleb,
Just got around to reading part five of Ethan and Andy and I wanted to let you know that I enjoyed reading it a lot. Well now I see Milly don't know about the discipline relationships in the village and that is just fine with Caleb I bet.

(LOL, I'm sure he would be if that turns out to be the case. We don't really have a clear picture on what Milly and Liam know at this point , or even what they might suspect. Bt I don't think she would embarass her son will the knowledge even if she did.)


Maybe that is what Andy needed to talk to Caleb and now hopefully Caleb can help him through these trying times he is having and let Jack, Kevin and the other tops take care of Ethan and get him back on the right track with his and Andy's relationship.

(I'm sure Andy needs to talk to the others, well the ones he can trust at this point. Caleb is used to confessions in his work so he shouldn't have to much trouble with any of it.
I do agree with Andy though, it is his business and he should be allowed to work it out with his own partner in the way he chooses. Andy may be a brat but he is also intelligent, having gone to uni and now a vet. I think once he gets past the hurt feelings and can look at this better he will take the bull by the horns so to speak, lol)


Looking forward to reading part six to see what will happen in that part.

(You go girl!)

Mary Anne

Danyiel and the baby (Kathy)

Great story. Thanks so much for sending it to me!!

Kathy

Your welcome. Happy to accommodate lol!

Caleb

Mary Anne (pt 4)

Hi Caleb,
I have just got through reading part four of the Ethan and Andy saga and let me tell you it was a pleasure to read and yes I knew I would be looking forward to reading it and that I did, well I don't know if there are anymore parts up just yet because I am catching up with my mail but hopefully there is more waiting in my mail to read.

(There are already four more parts up after this one.)

Well now looks like Ethan has just found himself an unofficial therapist in Kevin and I can't wait to read about his therapy believe me.

(I hate to disappoint but that won't all be written out as it would take away from whatthereader wishes to imagine. Just keep in mind that Kevin would not physically punish Ethan, Adam maybe but not Ethan.)

Poor Andy is taking it hard and that Teddy Bear will help him get through this mess hopefully and I really hope Ethan will get better as well very soon with the help of Kevin and possibly others in the village so he and Andy can start putting the pieces of their lives back together and be a happy couple once again.

(No one wants that more than we do, except possibly Ethan and Andy themselves. It is hard to write the sadder times but in all lives there is some. To ignore that would be telling our readers they are stupid.)

I know both Liam and Milly will be there for Andy if he needs to talk about anything and will be there for the long haul. Looking forward to reading the next part or parts to see how Kevin's form of Therapy will be working out.

(Enjoy yourself love. We did.)

Mary Anne

Wednesday, 1 July 2009

Not Rain... Kathy

Thanks so much for the Not Rain...........story. I truly adored it. I think I am a Danyiel and Jonathan junkie..........MORE STORIES about them PLEASE :)

Kathy


LOL, thanks Kathy but everyone gets a turn and they do feature in more of the cross overs.

Caleb