Mary Anne (Brat Swap)

Hi Caleb,
I just wanted to thank you for another fantabulous crossover story, I took my time and read it day by day until I finally read the last of it last night, I guess you can say I was savoring it because I don't know when I will be seeing more fantastic stories from you and I wanted to stretch that last one out.

(You stretch as long as you want girlfriend. We don't mind, lol.


I took your advice and kept notes to keep up with the action and I loved it. The idea of swapping brats was incredible and gave the brats a sense of what it would be like living with other tops instead of their own and what they would do if trouble sprung up and believe me there was trouble a plenty just like I like it, to keep the tops on their toes and boy did they.

(We thought it would help with something this long. I know when I read a really long story I do that just so I don't forget what I want to comment on.

Yes, we are trying out new things with our little village; not just always the same stuff that everyone writes about).


The idea to have a poker game at the end of the two week swap for the tops to get their original brats back and get rid of the temp tops where I bet if the brats hadn't decided to race cars and get caught by none other than Jack and Aled's dad Jeff there would have been hot make up and missed sex all the way around instead of the Tops have to roast backsides with all too handy paddles (GRINS), not this time though except for maybe a few, I know I wouldn't want anything near by toasted butt for a while at least.

(I don't know who was looking forward to it more, the Tops or the brats but they did go out with a bang.LOL.
As for the hot sex I know at least two of the Tops would even if their partner was paddled within an inch of his life. Trevor actually looks forward to it and Jack doesn;t let it stop him).

I see Chloe couldn't resist the race either and wound up in trouble right along with Emily, fortunately they managed to lose their escort Jeff and probably hightailed it back to their homes and hiding under the beds or closets to keep anyone from finding them, especially it Jeff managed to track down Molly and Pru.

(LOL, yep the girls had to be there too! I'msure that Jeff went and found Molly and Pru and there were tears before bedtime in the lesbian quarter too).

I totally loved and enjoyed this whole October's stories and I can't wait to read more of your new stories very soon I hope or whenever you get the time to write more. I hope everything is OK with both you and Adam and I will be waiting patiently until more is posted I hope.

(November 16)

Mary Anne