Mary Anne (Top War)

Hi Caleb,
I finally have got around to finish reading this magnificent and long awaited story, been another one of my busy weeks believe me and still not through just yet.

(LOL there's a lot of it about. We have been having one of those for about a month!)


Anyway I wanted to let you know that I truly enjoyed reading this first story with a passion,
hmm sounds like the brats weren't too happy with their vanilla tops after one day and I wonder if Michael's experiment worked out like he hoped it would so the brats wouldn't be complaining too much about their tops the next time they get together too much that is.

(I'm not real sure how the "little" ones took it but the "big guys" seemed to be in the spirit of it all. Well, at least Adam emmersed himself in the roll. I think they all learned something from this and greener grass and be careful what you wish for.)


I see Jack talking to Ethan and Ethan talking to Charlie about Aled helped put Charlie in the mood to be Aled's full time top even though he *don't* want one and Aled found out first hand about that little oversight I do believe with Charlie's paddle having a nice and painful conversation with Aled's bare butt and I say he deserved it more than anything.

(Ethan usually finds himself in the middle of these situations. But he's a Top of a different colour by far. I can understand Jack's reluctance though, after all Aled is his baby brother and not everyone takes this sort of thing well from the "in laws".
Charlie did step up to the plate though and we should all applaud him for it.)


I wonder if Charlie will indeed talk to Jeff about building that woodshed in the back yard for Charlie's use with Aled and I do believe that Ethan's advice to Charlie putting Aled on a short leash for a while will be what Aled needs to be happy once again.

(I'm sure Charlie will. He doesn't strike me as the type to say something and then not follow through.
Jeff will be more than pleased LOL!)


As soon as I get a chance I will read the next story in this sequence Demolition Duo and will give feedback to that one as soon as I get through reading it.

(No worries it isn't going anywhere. I'm glad that you enjoy our writing and hope that you continue to for a very long time. Nether Kipping has a special place with us.)

Mary Anne