Workin For Da Man

Caleb,
Thank you for sending me this most exciting and in some ways hilarious story and I loved it with a complete passion. I am so happy that you sent this story this way because I tries to read the feedback you sent me in reference to the re,re humph one and all I got was a bunch of squiggly lines and boxes in between some of the words I could make out so I ended up deleting the file that I downloaded it with.

It could be our downloads are not compatible,lol!


Anyway on with the story, just wanted to let you know that you made my day err night more pleasurable with this new story and I loved it a lot. You weren't kidding when you said that I would be surprised as to whom both Joseph and Jacob would end up with and boy was I because I knew they were both brats from just reading about them and now here is Devlin with Joseph and Jason with Jacob, twins with twins who would have figured,

We gave that few days thought. I used to think it was so cliche when I would hear real life twins marryin twins but hey, we can be cliche too apparently.



didn't even know Devlin was a Top until I read this but I suspected Jason of being one and what a way to get a brat real fast in Jason and Jacob's case meeting at a get together for doctors and having sex within 10 minutes of meeting eachother now that was fast and I loved it.

Frankly it happens that way a lot in our circle, not the getting together bit but the sex. I hate to say it but in the gay community it stll is a lot of sex in corners type thing. Fortunately, Jason, (who by the way gets a name change later on as we decided we weren't that keen on either Devlin or Jason for names lol) is an honourable man and made an honest one of Jacob.



Poor Jason though he was so confused when he went to meet Devlin's partner for the first time and thinking that Jacob was two timing Devlin, I don't think he was very happy about that
No he certainly was not a happy doctor at that time was he? It all worked out though in the end.


and poor Joseph taking the heat so to speak for Jacob's behavior from Devlin and Joseph not even trying to correct him at that time as it was when Jason confronted Jacob in the Cafe about the two timing and not even trying to deny that either until it got to the point where Jacob was upset and getting louder and bring Adam out and his glare put Jason in his place and Jacob finally telling Jason about his twin brother Joseph and both Devlin and Jason finally getting to meet Joseph and Jacob at the same time so then they had no reason not to believe the boys then.

LOL I think I followed that. Yes, Joseph did take a lot of heat for his brother I will admit but I'm pretty sure he was more pissed at Jacob when he found out than Devlin (who gets a name change too).
I think that Dev and Jay will have their hands full with Joey and Jake don't you?


The poker party was a trip even in my book from Charlie smacking Ethan to Jen and Melanie showing up and having Ethan call the rest of the lesbians to invite them to Jack's poker party to Melanie trying to get Chris in trouble with Jack, to Jude running out of the room yelling for Tristan telling him that Caleb was killing Chloe and the one that takes the cake was Caleb throwing up on Chloe and Chloe throwing up on Caleb. Hmm I wonder what the shriek that was heard throughout Jack's house was about and let's hope that the candles that Chris and Emily lit won't catch anything on fire although there is some firefighters in the house with Kevin and Aled but I don't think it would help unless they had they firetruck there.

Okay one at a time here, I haven't read this again so I'm winging it! I wasn't too sure who was more upset, Charlie or Ethan over that. I think maybe Charlie.

My poor confused Top gets himself in such predicaments,although he would move mountains for Jack, I'm sure.

Melanie is going to be trouble I can see it now. God help us if her and Chloe become friends!

I'm not sure that even fire is brave enough to risk pissing Kevin off when he is relaxing.


I just loved the stories that the Tops were telling about what happened with the brats but the one that stood out was Melanie trying to make Tacos at 3 in the morning and getting distracted by a whimpering dog and setting the house on fire and Jen waking up to Kevin standing over her and her out on the lawn in here nightgown, good thing she don't sleep in her birthday suit now that would have not only the neighbors talking but the firefighters as well.

IF anyone could pull off the whole "I'm in my birthday suit and it does not bother me" thing it would be Jen I think. She doesn't seem to ruffle easily. Of course it could be the whole specialist thing and she even has Jack on her team, now that's a feat.


Most definitely looking forward to reading more of your amazing stories very soon, yea I know it will probably be later on this month or even next month but you can't blame a girl for trying though. I still have these two that you sent to be to reread if I get bored and want to read them again, at least that will keep me occupied until you send more. Thank you so much for sending me the stories you know exactly how to make my day or night much more better.

Mary Anne


We're slow now I admit but we will get them to you darlin.