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Caleb,
I have finally gotten around to reading this fist new story you sent and I wanted to let you know that I thoroughly loved and enjoyed reading it with a passion. I see Ethan was up to his tricks again with the chocolate cake thanks to Trevor and it sounded like when Jen found out she was not a very happy doctor and she let Ethan, Travis, Chloe and Trevor know it as well by contacting Jack and making sure he took care of Ethan and boy did he and I see that over the knee cane is history and decorating Jack's garden for that I know Ethan, Andy, Chris and Trevor are grateful for.

Jack takes his resposibilities seriously and possibly moreso since that "talk" with his dada few stories back.
Jen knows just where to hit so it hurts doesn't she.


As far as Travis, Chloe and Trevor they were keeping Adam's corners company in the cafe and I loved it. Looks like Adam's talk with Callum about his and Travis's relationship has changed them for the better and now Callum gets to be home more and Travis don't have to feel like a lodger anymore. I guess we can safely say the *barn raising* was a success all the way around. Good thing both Callum and Travis know how to cook because is sounds like Stella and Beatrice are going their own way and Stella won't be working for Callum and Travis anymore.

Everyone moves on at some time and even though Stella has been with Callum for years she has always wanted a little bistro of her own. She doesn't want to compete with Adam or Shappa but maybe enhance the dining experience of Nether Kipping?


I do believe Chloe found herself in trouble with Adam and his paddle for that party she and the girls threw and I loved it, don't think Chloe did though.

No, Chloe would not like that one bit I'm afraid.

I see Jack convinced Jen in letting Ethan go to Brazil but not without supervision with Jack, Chris and Andy along for the ride and sounds like Kevin is all for the idea as well.

Yep, and it gives us something to write about later on. OF course that will have to be after a few others are done.


I am surprised that when Chris set the smoke detector off by killing the tea kettle that the alarm didn't go off at the Fire Station bringing Kevin and brigade to Jack's house. I see Trevor couldn't stay out of trouble either with Jack and he showed Trevor just how he felt about disrespecting Pru and her undergarments with that infamous cane, that even sounding nasty and very painful even to me.


Jack is cane happy. We might even find out why later on, you never know. I think Chris, Trevor Ethan and Aled should go on holiday together and maybe take Joseph with them. Jack would have to behave for a little while then lol!

Whenever I get the time to read the next new story you sent I will be sending you more feedback for that one. I am so happy that you are feeling much better now and that things are just perfect with you and Adam. I read about you taking a break from writing maybe until September and I don't blame you one bit. Believe me if I get to missing your stories I will go back and reread the ones I have saved on my computer in my documents and to let you know I am seriously thinking about buying one or more of the books in the near future. Looking forward to reading the next story when I get the time and I hope you and Adam have a good time on vacation.



Mary Anne

New ones are being thought about and hoepfully put to paper soonish. You hold that thought on buying though. I am revising at the beginninbg of the year and we now have the option to discount. I will keep you posted.