Khaki Invasion

Hi Caleb,
I have just now finally got around to reading this fantastic and long awaited story from you and Adam. Thank you for the heads up to the new characters that I would encounter while reading this and I was happy to see that the Nether Kipling Village got four new characters with Paul, Gideon, Dylan and Ian and I loved them a lot, I didn't have any problem with them once I got to know them better.

They grow on a person I think. You will get some background on them all in another story that we are going to begin soon. (since this was months ago I have to say that that story in being written and is already nearly 200 pages)

Sounds like the brats didn't like the newcomers in Khaki at first and tried their best to make sure that no more ex-soldiers would invade the village but unfortunately that plan backfired big time for all involved including Jesse and Emily I see and I loved it.

You know what they say, best laid plans and all. Our boys just can't seem to stay out of trouble no matter what they do.

Now I got a laugh out of Jack, Ethan, Damon, Aled, and Edward when they found out who was moving into the village none other than the RSM himself, especially Jack I didn't think anything scared him, I thought he scared the others and that was a precious sight.

Jack was young when he met the RSM and as he says Paul helped to make him the man he is in some ways. It was precious and hopefully we can explore that in more depth at some point.



Now though that the brat fiasco has been taken care of and Jack and the new ex-soldiers are finally becoming friends albeit very slowly the village will be much more calmer and everyone will start getting along more and the four newcomers will be welcomed into the family with open arms. I guess the brats in the village will not only have to be on the lookout for Jack and Kevin being swat happy but probably down the road in the future Paul and Dylan as well when they get to know them better.

I know Paul won't find it difficult to swat at will, he was the RSM after all but Dylan may stay his hand a bit more. He was just a Captain after all lol!

The talk in the garden between Paul and Chris was memorable and now I think Chris understands Jack and the others more and the reasons they don't want to talk about Sandhurst and what they went through as far as being in the service goes.

Chris has a big curious bone hidden inside him but he lets it come out as it will. His main concern in life is Jack. You've seen the WWJD braclets that came out eons ago? FOr Chris it is what would jack do.

Most definitely looking forward to reading more of your amazing stories very soon or whenever you two have the time to write more, that is if you do that is. By the way thank you for the pictures of the chickens they are adorable, well for chickens anyway. I hope you and Adam are doing well and things are settling down for you two finally.


Mary Anne

The chickens are all laying now and have their own unique personalities. I really enjoy watching them. Adam put a roof on their pen and we call it their conservatory lol!