Mary Anne (pt 7)

Hi Caleb,
Me again with more feedback, I know you are going to get tired of me commenting but I can't help it, I love your and Adam's writing so much.

(Not in this life time. You make our mornings!)

Makes me think that I am actually in the scene itself when I read your stories no matter which couple it may be about or Crossover.

(Do you realise this is the highest compliment a reader can give to a writer? I am humbled by it and very happy that you feel this way!)

Well now looks like Kevin has a strong dislike for Ethan's parents and now that he has talked to Andy he knows where to start as far as fixing a broken Ethan once and for all.

(I'm waiting for Jack to have it out with Ethan's parents since "his boy" can't with the whole Catholic upbringing and all. Yes I know some kids can even with it but Ethan is not one of those, sadly.

Kevin hopes he knows where to start, too bad he and Caleb don;t compare notes.)

I have to agree with Kevin here talk to Ethan again and then turn him over to Jack as a temporary top to Ethan which I know Ethan is not a brat but a top himself but right now he needs the brat attention that any brat would need in this circumstance I do believe to get him back on track of being a top and taking control of Andy once again .

(You like the good Top/ bad Top game do you? Yes I think between the two of them they can wear him down.

I'm surprised to see it voiced that Ethan needs the attention one would normally give to a brat at this time but that is spot on. Thank you! He meant it when he said he was being a prig and self centered at the moment and he meant it in a good way. He can't do for Andy if he can't do for himself. I suppose you could say that was his cry for help Ethan style.)

Thank goodness Kevin was there for Andy when Andy needed a cuddle and from the sounds of it I think Andy better be on his best behavior around Kevin and having no thoughts of locking Liam, Milly, Kevin or any other tops in a cupboard on he will be one very sorry brat Ethan or not I do believe.

(LOL! No Kevin is nothing like Damon who is rather easy going until it's time to be tough. kevin spanks first and asks later.)

Mary Anne