Mary Anne (Brown is not the new black)

Hi Caleb,
Just wanted to let you know I found the new story under Charlie and Aled and I wanted to tell you that I enjoyed reading it a lot.

You are like a pit bull...relentless. Sorry you had to search, I thought I'd said it was in Charlie and Aled's blog. My bad.

Poor Charlie he is just going to have to wear his birthday suit until his new clothes come or else borrow some off the other tops,

(Jack did offer clothes to Aled. It could be hard to find any from the others though, he's so tall and skinny. Believe it or not he and Jack are the same height but Jack is more solid. )

something tells me that Charlie wasn't happy with that bike now is it junk and in little bitty parts

(Yeah, I think Aled has had enough grief with that bike so he just cut his losses over it.)

oh well by the time Charlie gets through with Aled I don't think he would want to sit on that bike for awhile at least.

(One thing about Aled that we will find is he knows when he really does need to be spanked, unlike some brats that you may read he owns up to it too but to give Charlie back the paddle I thought was a little much lol. I wouldn't have!)


Looks like Chris found himself in trouble with Jack for the gun incident and I don't blame Shappa one bit for not wanting to talk to Jack about Chris he is scary enough even to me, leave it to Ethan and I loved it.

(We do have to remember that Shappa, although a Top is still only 24 years old and I should think he would be intimadated at times by the older ones. He and Tristan are both the youngest and I think we tend to forget that.

Ethan on the other hand has no problem with Jack. They have been through so much together that it only makes sense.)

I don't think Adam was happy with Chloe either when he saw her on that bike and scared her a little, loved it.

(Chloe is a person unto herself. I enjoy her immensely.)

Now on to Callum and Travis, I do believe Travis is about to feel the wrath of Callum for even thinking of riding that bike I do believe.

(Once Travis stops to listen when Callum talks he finds himself more in trouble than not. Maybe the brats should of sat the Tops down and done a poll on motorbikesm lol!)

Can't wait to the other two new stories get posted to see who or what they will be about, I love to play hide and seek. Tremendously Terrific Job with this story.

I should have at least one of them up later on today. I want to hunt up some pictures if that is possible to go with them. We will see.

Thank you so very much for reading and I am very glad that you liked it.

Mary Anne