Hi Caleb,
Thank you so much for letting me know about the new story, you may not know be too well just yet but when I see another story you have put out I don't wait to read it unless of course it comes out when my computer is off or when I am not home, but when I see it I read and that is what I am doing now.

(Well, thank you Mary Anne, it makes me smile to know that you enjoy them so much. We try to write not only for ourselves, which all writers do, but for those other people who take the time to read them and comment)

I just wanted to let you know that I totally loved and enjoyed this story with a complete passion and made this Hot Saturday evening a lot better and thank goodness no grass cutting this week but will have to next week though and I am dreading it believe me.

(LOL Adam is doing ours with the scissors again. He let it go too long and then our mower-which hovers- can't do the job.)

The idea with Luke and Ethan going to India and leaving Damon bratsitting for Andy and Seth was magnificent at first I didn't think he could handle the two temporary brats as well as his own with Nick but so far so good. I say he handled them perfectly for the whole two weeks especially giving Seth what he needed when he was missing Luke so much and acting out and Nick agreed wholeheartedly about Damon spanking other brats if needed and giving spanking rights by both Luke and Ethan was a godsend I do believe.

(Going anywhere for that length of time there was no telling what they could get into, spanking rights had to be in place and it proved right didn't it LOL)

I see Adam followed through with the swatting of Chloe and corner time which she didn't like one bit from what I saw and she was showing her displeasure with the few tops that showed up at the Cafe and I loved it.

(Oh yes, Chloe is a brat unto herself I think. Adam will just have to buckup and paddle the little lady sometime just so she knows who the boss is)

Poor Andy being left alone to manage the Vets and the paperwork without Molly was funny when her and Chloe went on vacation for two weeks, at least he had Chris to help him when needed.

(Chris can be helpful and nice when he wants. I don't think his comment in passing was though, at least Damon didn't find it was later on.)

Nick wanting Damon the adopt his foster brats was priceless but don't think Damon will agree and most definitely not Luke or Ethan I'm afraid Nick.

(Sadly no)

Something tells me that the brats going to Oxford and getting drunk was not a very good idea I don't think and the phone tag that the tops were playing even the ones out of the country about missing brats was hilarious in my book and as far as I can tell four of the thirteen brats, fourteen if you count Chloe will escape this drinking fiasco with their backsides intact for a change so far that is.

LOL! We do that a lot with the phone don't we but it does seem to work with these guys. Yes, I do believe that there will be tears before bed)

I don't think Kevin and Declan will be too mad that Alex and Edward went to Oxford and retrieved the brats and brought them back home safe and sound, one they forgot though and that was Seth him being in the Police Station in a cell sleeping it off, I wonder who will be retrieving him.

(No not mad at all. We don't treat our brats like little kids if possible, or unless they want it at a certain time in their life. Even Jude does not always get treated like a child. Yes Seth is very naughty isn't he?)


Man Luke was sneaky when he called his and Seth's mothers to go and get Seth out of jail, now they are planning on moving to Nether Kipping heavens almighty.

Yes! The Mothers have arrived! Be afraid, be very afraid)

Well now I see all of the brats got punished for what happened in Oxford in which I say deserved what they got. Poor Seth though got is twice once from Damon and then again from Luke and he deserved it as well.

(Luke couldn't very well go back on what he had promised and being a Top wouldn't. They are so logical that way,drat)

I see after Charlie saw what Kevin did to Aled's backside with his cane he didn't have the heart to spank him again for his part in the drinking fiasco, and what on earth was Andy thinking when he locked Damon in that storage cupboard, well I know he wasn't thinking and yes I have to agree that in a way Damon did push Andy a little too hard about the paperwork but it is in a way Andy's fault as well for coincidentally forgetting it.

(That was it! I love your what on earth was he thinking LOL. It all worked itself out though in the end)


Man I would most definitely hate to have to face Jack myself especially being in Ethan's shoes because man he scares even me. I say that Ethan did the right thing by grounding Andy and well with Ethan being grounded by Jack as well for the same amount of time both He and Andy will have a lot more time together and have some fun.

(Ethan doesn't always realise,him being a TOp and all, that he has displeased Jack. Actually I'm not sure he cares LOL, but when Jack pronounces sentence he does sit up and take notice. Once done, Ethan will follow it too the letter.)

Once again thank you for letting me know about this magnificent story and I loved how long it was, kept me entertained very well with all the plots and sub plots and I know this must have took a long time to write and share but I can't wait to read more when you get around to writing once again because I thoroughly enjoy reading about the Tops and Brats living in Nether Kipping whether it be crossover or individual stories about certain couples.

(We wer shocked at how long it was and sometimes that worries me. I think people will lose the will to live reading long stories. But as I went back through it I found there was enough action to keep anyone entertained, no grass growing here folks, and I am so glad you enjoyed it.)

Mary Anne